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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the depiction of the characters in ur story. At times i had wanted to cry. I must say that i 've only read half way through chap 2. i will ontinuing my reading though. can't wait to read more.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good one of the best YYH fics i have read in a long time. The writing was excelent, not stale at all. I liked the characterization that you put into this fic too.^^
You should do a sequel with HieiXKoenma^^
You should do a sequel with HieiXKoenma^^
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic love Yusuke/Shuichi fics update soon
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read some more chapters update soon please
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed what I've read so far. Please write more soon
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. I really can't think of another word to describe it. I like how in the chapter "Sweet Lemonaide" you contrast the two couples' style of intimacy. That was very beautifully done. I'm glad that Shuichi's step-father didn't get any farther...and I think your portrayal of Shuichi's angst/trauma and Yusuke's caring was very sweet...although, that's not quite the word I want, but I've already said beautiful a lot . :D
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was one of the cutest stories I have ever read!!! Yay!!! ^____^ Very clever and well done!!! *gives you chocolates* I really liked the ending, but the way you set it up made it so that you -could- have an...epilogue, of sorts. As in, they find out what happens to Suichi's step-father, and they feel the need to... "celebrate"..... yeah..... ^^;; ....Or you could just forget that and leave it the way it is. Why mess with perfection, right? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story isn't bad! I hope you write more of these!
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally a decent yusuke/kurama pairing... it was really good... the hiei/koenma thing was a real twist...i likey ;)...keep it up