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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic please write more soon
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good update soon
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed what I've read so far update soon please
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh holy hell the was awsome... poor hiei feeling all those emotions and not knowing what to do about them. hehe. i felt bad for him... but somehow i knew it was keiko who had made yusuke late. anyways i loved the kissing and how at the end hiei thought 'daylight is now good'
i can NOT wait foor you to put up the next part and im hoping to see them make love.
i can NOT wait foor you to put up the next part and im hoping to see them make love.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really, really awesome. Yusuke's so damn sexy. I'm hoping for a full lemon between them.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yusuke made the first move now all hiei has to do is couter that move. it like a game of chess one person makes a move to start the game and the other person couter it. wow i feel so smart for describing love like a game of chess.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll tell ya what, if anyone flames this story, they'll have hell ta pay from...*thinks* Pete!! Please, now don't ask me just who this Pete is, I don't know. But when I do, I'll get back to ya. Beautiful story, btw. Please update soon! In the name of Pete! *laughs* Sorry, that was lame. Just work at your own stride. ~Ys
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe love the tension thats building. update soon please
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh...this is gonna' be GOOD!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Very kewl idea -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Story, I really enjoyed reading this, luring the two closer together in a delicate way. I love how its showing Heie becoming more and more aware of Yusuke.