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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good, it looks like you rushed it, well at least with the lemon scene, Kurama's lemon scene should be long and passionate^_^, but it was good, it didnt suck. Good job!!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I didn't think this chapter sucked. I liked it. This story was awesome!! I love you!! (HAHA, scaring you, aren't I?) WRITE MORE OF YOUR STORIES NOW.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOW WHAT KIND OF LEMON WAS THAT?! LOL. I liked Rose's, "Like I have a choice" response to Kurama's proposal. It's like, I've only had three of your children, so what the hell? LMAO. I thought this chapter was funny, and the additional sceen of Keiko and Yusuke was awesome. MORE!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, excellent chapter, you should try to write in the labor scene, have more Kurama going on in there. Keep writing!! You doing great!!^_^
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is all too familiar, lol. It's awesome reading another version of Kurama becoming a father. I thought it was cute. Sakura, huh? Just like mine. Lol, it doesn't matter because this chapter rocked my socks as usual. I can't waaaaaaiiiiit to read the others!! *glomp*
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA OMG. That lemon was awesome. I love how you portrayed Kurama, you evil woman you. And I can definitely see the resemblance to PBaR, but that's alright because it's good to know that I am such a WRITING FIEND WHO LEADS MY FELLOW ASPIRING WRITERS AKA YOU. LMAO. You dished this chapter out quick! Yay! I can't wait for the next one!! WRITE!! *glomp*
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are doing good, i remember your story a while back, it was still good, keep writing, i Love Kurama!!!^_^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO ANGRY SEXY KURAMA!! *glomp*
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did review for you non-NC-17 one of this. I can't wait for you to update! Plz do do! JA NE
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought I'd make you feel better by leaving you a review. This chapter did NOT suck; I thought it was good and will be a good start to some future occurrences. :D Don't be so hard on yourself, woman. WRITE. *glomp*