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snicker i love the way the fact he was going to be seme just hit kurama like that :P - i'm amazed Hiei's going through with it or that their doing it now,

love the whole story so far. this chpt was really cute and swt. it was very romantic but it also sounded like something hiei would do lol. i think the necklace thing is very swt. but thats just me. ne ways cant wait for the nxt chpt. pls update soon.

:3 I find this all terribly fascinating. Your story (well stories I guess as of now) is one of the only I follow religiously. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!!!

Yay! You started this story! I really liked how everything turned out in this chapter. Some people do like to make Hiei half female (and I'm one of them. ^_^) There is a fanfic on www.mediaminer.org that has it like that. It's really good, and it was the first one that got me all emotional. It's called 'Forbidden Love', by heeropika. There are a lot of stories called forbidden love there, so make sure it has that author. The real author for that story is b-chan (or saiyanb, which is her name she has here on AFF.) She doesn't have it on here or I would have told you. It's a cool story and you can check it out if you want to. I will be looking for the next chapter on friday, so you had better update! (It's not a threat, I just wanted to stick it in here. ^_^)
Sincerely Mea ^_^

Well i must admit, certainly a twist in the story, usually i dont like the whole male pregnancy thing, but you pulled it off well. Keep up the awesome job.

OMFG!!!!! *in shock* I WAS RIGHT! IVE NEVER been right about something like this before! i even drew a pic of what thier kids could look like! THIS IS SOOO AWSOME! wait...i surprisingly knew this, and yet, i was in shock? gods i am odd. and calmer now. no more shock, ano, i am very excited to read more. please write more soon? i am practically diing to read ur version. i kinda made up a version of my own based on ur fic, but it was only in my mind. ok im more NOT diing in order to read it but whatever. i cant wait for more! ^,^ more! i only wish i could help, to quicken the pace, but that aint gonna happen ne? ok ill stop babbling now.

tee-hee! yes, here i am again! this is so awsome!!!! hiei is going to get pregnant(i forgot how to spell it ^^;;;)!! and kurama is going to be seme!!!

Just a quick note about how I love the new story. You are going to have to write an awsome lemon for this part. It is such a special time. I am 5 months pregnant now and can't wait to have this baby. I loved the way you explained the mpreg. thing in Hiei's case. Too many stories just have him pregnant and even better yet have the baby (no c-section) It just ruins the flow of a story. Anyway before I start a rant. Love the story and can't wait till next Friday.

^_^! Awwww!!! Hiei is so kawaii!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can!