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Gomen for not reviewing in a while...I have been reading this. As much as I dislike mpreg...I'm gonna shoot you if the baby *is* dead...really, I mean it...I'll hunt you down and shoot you! *pouts*

*weeps bitter tears* OH MY GOD! That was so sad! I swear, my hands were trembling and my heart was pounding through the whole thing. Oh, I hope the baby makes it. Hiei and Kurama would both be heartbroken if anything happened to their child. *blows her nose* Aw, I'm out of tissues now. Well, while I run down to the store to get more kleenex, you be sure and update, all righty?

Okay, that was like rude! I can't wait to see whether or not the baby survives! I really hope it does. It would suck if it didn't. I'm suprised Kurama didn't kill his boss. I sure as hell would have! Can't wait for the update. Make it soon please!

Evil Cliffy? That's the understatement of the year!!!!!

I love this story, and will wait as patiently as I possibly can for the next chapter. tap tap tap tap tap (<--my foot) tap tap...not here yet? *Sigh* tap tap tap. Hay, I said as patiently as I can...which isn't very much at all.

I really like the way you have made the characters grow in your stories. It gives your story depth and makes me feel closer to them. I hope all turns out well; I am a sucker for happy endings, but it's your story, so I will wait and see where you take it. You have not let us down yet.

I agree with mhmartini, but I think that you already answered what happens, sorta, when you answered my question, Ah-ha! (Feeling very clever)... unless you were lying, in that case you are very tricky. I'm done being an ass, sorry. I love the story and want to see what happens with their baby as soon as possible.

Oh, oh you are SOOOOO evil! *cries* I need to know what's going to happen to Hiei and the baby!! GAH!!!

Awesome story, though ^_~

What a great story so far. I'm glad Kurama finally quit his job. What an ass his boss was. Oh, that was a horrible cliffie. Please update soon to let us know if teh baby is fine.

hiya its LanEiseJun WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT THOSE CLIFFS DAMNIT! i thought i told you to stay away from them.

Oh that was completely evil. And I thought I was bad at cliffhangers. I have found I do not hold a candle to you, you evil evil author LOL Good chapter, I hope Hiei and the baby are going to be okay. I also hope Hiei goes and has a talk with Kurama's ex boss lol Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.

You are a very mean girl!!!! i can´t believe that was the end of the chapter!!! But, at least, if you already decided to kill their children , i can beg you to not do that!! please, don´t kill their baby!!! I know you can save him some how, afterall, yukina, botan and koenma are there!! They deserve bein' happy!! Please, update soon!!