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Great chapter! Even Hiei has the right to cry for what he went through and lets hope Yomi is really gone now....pleaseee, Kurama has enough to fix with this without any more back lash.Although it may be good theraphy to let Hiei take a few blows at Yomi's castle and set fire to a few walls or something(maybe Yusuke could suggest it) to help Hiei talk with him so Hiei knows Yusuke cares(maybe not)Anyway nicely done and update soon please

Aww, how sweet. I feel so bad for Hiei, but I know Kurama will get him through it. I look forward to your next update, and I will be looking for your one-shot.

That chapter was really good. You could have been a little more detailed with the fight scene, but otherwise the chapter was really good. I still vote girl for the baby, but this time I won't bother you with that. I have nothing else really to say except please update soon.

;-; Poor Hiei!!! omg that is soooo sad!! Please update soon! I have to find out what happens next!

Not a cliff hanger?! are you kidding or what!? How could you end it there,yes I know Hiei and Kurama have to work through their feelings and convincing Hiei that everything is alright with them is going to be a tough job but Uncle Yusuke can help with that .Hope you update soon.
Nice chapter

O_O Gosh! I was holding my breath through that whole last chapter! That was INTENSE, girl! Nice job! *hands ye a cookie and a Kurama plushie* I wrote a Hiei Mpreg fic awhile back. It's called Toxic Kiss. It's on FF.net if you want to read it. My penname there is Aibyoka. Since you seem to be DA MASTA of Hiei Mpreg, I'd be really honored if you'd check it out.

And, this story totally says everything that I have to say about Hiei being half koorime. I think that he CAN produce both ways. It's possible! And, when he turns 100, he could concieve a daughter, as all koorime do when they turn 100. *sighs* Gosh, Hiei's a facinating character. Write more soon! I'll be waiting eagerly!

Oh that was awesome! You capture the tenseness and everything so well. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!!

sorry that i haven't been reviewing lately ^^;; poor Hiei and Toushi. i love them both so much! my favorite part about this chapter was when Yomi died *laughs evily*

Yay!!! Yomi got his just deserts! But, damn it, poor Hiei! Poor poor Hiei and Kurama....I wanna play marriage coulselor and make Hiei listen to how Kurama feels....but that's just me...or not...but, anyways...another well written chapter, don't appologize for life interfering, it happens. I'm happy you update and keep up the quality of work. As I said, if I didn't like your writing, I wouldnt have continued to read this....and I meant it...I don't really care for mpregs....but, I love this story, so, that should say something.

I was getting antsy waiting for this chapter, but it was worth the wait! I really enjoyed it, and I believe that decapitation is, for most cases, permanent. I am really looking forward to Kurama reassuring Hiei and Hiei learning to accept himself and Kurama's love.

As antsy as I know I will get, I patiently (sorta) await your next chapter.