rate_review Reviews

Ooh! I loved this lots. Everyone seems in character so far and you've got and interesting plot going on to boot. That's my favorite mix. And aggressive Keiko is so fun when she intimidates big strong youkai!

Hope you update soon!

Thanks for the spoiler about Yusuke losing the Makai Tournament. You're supposed to give a spoiler warning. With one unthinking sentence you wrote in your author's notes you ruined the outcome of the tournament for me. I've spent a lot of money purchasing the English dubbed version of YuYu DVDs as they are released. I only had TWO MORE DVD's to go which would end the tournament and the series. Cartoon Network hasn't even aired the complete Sensui Arc yet. For those of us who haven't seen the rest of the series because they either don't live in Japon or have not purchased the Japanese dialogue with English subtitles DVD version, you owe us an apology. I'M VERY DISAPPOINTED. Now I am going to read your fic anyway because I don't hold grudges, but I would like you to remove the sentence with the spoiler in your beginning notes OR at least put in your summary that you've given away a spoiler in your beginning comments.

GO KEIKO, ATTA GIRL!!! SHOW HIM WHO'S BOSS!!! hehe, i love kickass characters like Keiko and Hilary from Beyblade, THEY'RE THE BEST!!!! YOU ARE MY HERO, YOU WRITE THE KIND OF STORIES THAT I ALWAYS WANT TO READ, I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!!