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Wow that was so yummy. I love a threesome. Update soon.

*dies* I was sick and so I didn't get to know that ya had written another fic...*dies again*

Since I'm pratically fallen asleep here at the comp- I gotta give a crappy review. Better ones will come though... Wonderful story (drools)!!! I can't wait for another chapter...

Awesome fucking chapter. That was so hot I was squirming in my chair. I think I need to turn the AC on. My favorite fics are when Yusuke starts out as a novice and works his way up. That is so hot. I wish I had your patience to keep Yusuke still innocent and unsure. I guess it's my short attention span, LOL. Oh And by the way, I'll be posting chapter 5 sometime early this evening. It's done. I just have to finish the acknowledgements to the reviewers. But look for it tonight or I'll just email you right after I post it, K.^_^

i love you pajama woman LOVE YA! you do great hyperness goodness and you do great seriousness you are so wonderfullness ^_^ i am so frikity happpy with you

Dang yur chapters keep getting better and better. The thing Hiei did, telling Yusuke what to do, was a first for me. I've never seen anything like it in a fic and I must applaude you for your originality.

great lemon this one was better then the first to me they just seem to get better each time you write them.

Very nice. I like this story very much. It combines the smut we all love with some real life things, like the admissions. I must say, they went far better than i thought they would. I agree that shock and confusion were my interpretation of Kuwa's response. There may have been a touch of homophobia in there, but not from the gay hating perspective, more from the hate what you don't understand perspective. I got the impression that he had never considered the...mechanics of a male-male(-male) relationship, and wasn't entirely sure what physical acts were possible/preferred between males. His response was more of a knee-jerk reaction to something unfamiliar than a hate-based bias, anti-gay reaction. He got caught offguard, and it put him on the offensive. It could be construed as homophobic in other context, though. I am drawing these conclusions after having read a couple of your stories, and I just don't see you painting Kuwa as a right wing, hate criminal. Maybe I am interpreting your writing more than Kuwa's reaction. It made sense to me, though, in the grand scheme of your stories. I am still in denial about Kuwa's reaction in the dub, when Itsuki admits to wanting Shinobu, so I may be in denial here, too.

You updated at a convention. I am impressed. I'll be going to a convention in a few weeks, and I can tell you now that there will be no updates from me that weekend. I admire your devotion to your stories.

Another excellent story, and I look forward to your updates.

Loved the chapter. I'm so glad that Hiei stuck up for Yusuke after Keiko smacked him. It serves her right. I think she accepted the relationship a bit too quickly, but then the fic is not based on Keiko and Kuwa's approval or disapproval, just their reactions. Of course she was shocked and smacked Yusuke, but I was surprised that she didn't cry. I guess if I was her I'd save my crying and feeling sorry for myself until I got home. Really good chappie.

wonderful
please update soon

See, Kuwa might not be smart, but he does understand that feeling are exchangable no matter what sex. I really hate the English dubbers for making him seem like he was shunning Sensui and Itsuki's relationship.

Plus, I do have wonder how Yusuke can suddenly fear Keiko when she only smacked him for sexual misconduct... she doesn't smack him 24:7. That makes me think that Yusuke's conduct should be promoted. Besides, whenever Yusuke gets hit, he shrugs it off.