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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice semi-sweet scene. Now only if the future chappies don't have any Kuwa-bashing, I can stick around and read more.
If there's kuwabra bashing I'm out
If there's kuwabra bashing I'm out
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to way that I like ch.s 8 & 9, Everyone is mostly in character.Thank you for not thrashing Kuwa in ch 8. I can see him acting that way, and yes I believe he would think its cool to fight side by side with a girl-friend.
Hehe I liekt aht Sango tried to callim Kazuma. I want to say that could be the first time a girl other than Shizuru or Yukina called him by name. For aminute I almost daydreamed about a Sango/Kuwabara pairing..... but I know he is manys LAST choice to pair up. But the number of us Kuwabara fans are growing!! Muhahahahahaha
hehe The scene between Hiei & Kagome was also done good. I can picture Kaogme telling Hiei off.
Hehe I liekt aht Sango tried to callim Kazuma. I want to say that could be the first time a girl other than Shizuru or Yukina called him by name. For aminute I almost daydreamed about a Sango/Kuwabara pairing..... but I know he is manys LAST choice to pair up. But the number of us Kuwabara fans are growing!! Muhahahahahaha
hehe The scene between Hiei & Kagome was also done good. I can picture Kaogme telling Hiei off.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Katzztar and Shona! I knew this story had bad vibes just by looking at it and I finally read it myself. Sorry to say, but this story deserves a one star rating.