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That was cute. I loved it a lot. I also liked how ya added Raizen 'n Mukuro too. Really nicely done. Great job.

~Ice Angel~

That... was freakin' sweet! ^__^ I just saw an episode with Yomi in it a few days ago, and he's really not the bad guy I envisioned from some fanfics I've read (granted, he's black-mailing Kurama, but hey...) In fact, I think he's actually a pretty cool guy, who apparently matured a lot between the time he went blind and the time he and Kurama reunited, and I liked how you didn't personify him as this evil guy like some writers do.

I also liked the way you portrayed their relationship- it sort of reminded me of myself and a friend; I can figure out a lot of stuff about her because, well, because I'm just able to, yet I am rather enigmatic to her. And I think that for anyone in a relationship with someone like Kurama, that could be the sort of relationship they'd have.

I also liked how you tied their gang to power and the whole Raizen/Mukuro thing- it all fit together quite nicely. So, what I guess I want to say (damn, I think this is one of the longer reviews I've ever given) is you did a great job. I liked it. XD

lol You must be taking Japanese Ultimate from Power-Glide. Good morning is romanized as Ohayou. ^ ^ It's okay though, I loved the story! Please write more when you have the time.