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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm............. you do know that that kind of sex is physically impossible, right? just fyi. other than that good story, even if someof the wording was a bit iffy. i really like the original plot, but the side-stories are good, too.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol its funny cuz i was listening to a song called bang bang bang while i read chapter 8 but please continue with the story! i don't like hiei upset with kurama
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Can't wait for more. I hope Kurama's out of the biz. If he's not he'll break Hiei's tender heart. Update soon.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please conitnue and update soon!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how hiei is so protective of kurama and Kurama accepts and cares for Hiei. the food fight was hilarious. HEHE, hiei fell asleep. HEHE. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is going really well so far and I hope you finish it.As far as a first date,well it couls be almost anything but where Would Hieiget the money for it?Mmm,how about sneaking in to the movies and making out somewhat or Hiei covering the bed in rose petals(getting the idea from Kurama's hair)or Kurama taking Hiei to that special spot he went to relax(somewhere quite)and being caught by a john and Hiei slapping the john around blarting out something about Kurama being his or.........
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*GASP!* This series is soooo kawaii! I just want to wrap them up and take them both home *glomps Hiei and Kurama plushies* YOUR STORY IS SO AWSOME!! Don't stop please!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG...you just totally made my week. I had no idea that if I kept clamoring for lemons that someone would actually put one in for me! You're so awesome *squeals*. Loved the confusion with what they were saying vs. what was being said on the porno. I also like the "Do it" "Do what?" confusion from Hiei. He's just too cute. I've been following all of your alternate unuiverse stories and I SO want you to write more.
You rule!
You rule!
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, hiei watching porn, that's just so hot for some reason rofl. HEHE, it was good, teaching Hiei how to be Seme in that way. can't wait for the "back to our regularly scheduled programming' chapter coming up next. The lemon was a nice diversion though, thanks
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great, girl!!!!!!! that was soooooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!but im so sorry that hiei has to b uke next time u_u but i really enjoyed this lemon (with hiei as seme and, of course: KURAMA=UKE!!!!!!!!!!!!) bye, keep on going with this great fic !!!!!!!!
nyaoh (kurama MUST be always uke, remember......)
nyaoh (kurama MUST be always uke, remember......)