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for If They'd Been Human

by CrimsonFox234

person angel
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wowee good jobb, gurl!! at least.. im asszumingz that u r a gurl.. so don't get annoyed if u arent.. somehow.. O.o;; toetally besidezz the point tho. GREAT JOBB!! i luv readin about kurama and hiei.. lol.. and u makxe it sound so funn.. great job!! <33 plzz hurry and updatee soon!!
person bob
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay its updated and there was a lemon! please continue i can't wait to see what happens!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very yummy lemon. Just the right amount of sweet and tart. Update soon.
person firekat
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. I really like how you twisted the chrachters around. Please post more and keep up the good work!!!
person BlueUtopiah
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story. Poor Hiei thinks he knows what's coming, but it looks like Kurama's going to have a few surprises for him. You do alterate universe very well, great writing. More! I demand lemons!
person Vapidbreath
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this. I haven't read a good Yu Yu Hakusho fic in a long while. I like that Kurama isn't as soft and emotional like his is portrayed in many other fics. I also like how Hiei isn't really cold or really soft. You have a nice mixture in his personality. Please let me know when you update if you can. I don't read much YYH fan fiction, so I never know when there's been an update.

Vapid Breath
person Everqueen
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. Hiei found out about Kurama's occupation and still likes him. I can't wait to read more.
person December Wind
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! New chapter~~~
I like how this is going... very much.
Kurama, he isn't acting like a crybaby. I'm so happy for that. Yay! Are they going to live together? This just gets better and better..
person bob
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha Kurama in a skirt.... thats funny but me really likes continue!!!!
person starlindakirara
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi!!!! i`m from argentina so my english isnt very good.....but i understand one thing...
YOU MUST PUT KURAMA AS UKE, HE LOOKS LIKE A GIRL, SO HE MUST PLAY THE GIRLS PART!!!!!!!! i hate when hiei-kun is uke.....HE MUST BE SEME!!!!!!!!!
ok, that was my review (lame, of course U_U)
sayonara bye bye!!!!!!!!!

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