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Nice. I'm loving it! I wonder...whatever could the two of them do at Kurama's apartment ::knowing smile:: Please write more!

Ya had a few grammar mistakes in there, but it was alright. But I meant that you had read "Two Shots." Did somebody have amnesia or did somebody have one too many hits with the crow? teehee... But it's a good story so far, you just need to make some corrections and proof read. I make mistakes all the time too, so I shouldn't really be talking. Staring at your hands while you type is NOT a good habit! No that it is not! *bangs fists on sliding thingy where the key board is* God I hate doing that....Keep writing! I wanna lemon! or something near that. Whatever you think is near to that. God, now I'm rambling. ~Ys

This is really good. I can't wait to see what will happen at the apartment now that Kurama knows Hiei's not jail bait. Update soon.

ooh my god... I really want to read more ;.; please update! it's a great story idea and my god i love how you wright about hiei *squee*

Somebody read the mange extra!! But I like it...I'm just wondering if you might want to add the story code "AU" because I'm pretty sure Shuuichi would remember such a pretty little thing like Hi-chan....teehee! I know I wouldn't forget if I were in his shoes! ~Ys

i luv it you have my attention i can't wait to see where it goes, continue!