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i did not expect the captor to be koenma but please continue

Wow, Koenma. I wasn't expecting that at all, in fact I thought it was Shuuichi tied up in some depraved part of his mind. I like the pairing, it's fun and I wish more people did something with Koenma. But I do have to say this needs a betaing. There are a couple of repeated phrases, some missing letters, and a sentence that got cut off in the middle. Other wise, nice concept, can't wait for ch. 2.

Wow H! That was fucking awesome. Koenma and Yoko too damn hot. I'm so jealous I didn't think of that. I agree with you that Altar didn't have it on her wishlist either. I'm gonna do a one shot off her wishlist too. Don't know which one though. God, you write so hot and naughty. A girl after my own heart. Oh how I love the naughtiness. LOL

Holy shit! I need to get my eyes checked! Did you do something different? Sorry. It's just that I come to expect certain things from certain people... you know how it is when you're conditioned-- and then it suddenly changes! That was seriously good and exciting!

*dances around like a drunken ballerina* Lalalalalala! Woo~oo~oo~oooo!