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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is cute, but I want to say a few things. I think it's confusing when you write single sentences without writing who is speaking. Two or three is okay, but when it keeps going with both people saying 3 words it's hard to keep up. Just a thought.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATEGOODSTORYUPDATESOON. TRhat's all I have to say and PLEASE COMPLY TO THE FIRST WORD AND THE LAST TWO WORDS THANKYOU! ^____________________________________________________^ Love the story!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love it!! It's a really good peice of writing, and I'm hooked! The trials and tribulations that they're going through, it makes the story flow really well!! I can't wait for more. Hope to see you soon!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wheeee* It just keeps getting better and better! >.< thanks for the updates! <3333
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great addition to an already great story. You've got a good AU and storyline, and your characters are very much in keeping 'in character'.
I can't wait to see if Shiori is right and things will work out 'in the end' for 'the quarterback' and 'the brain'!
I can't wait to see if Shiori is right and things will work out 'in the end' for 'the quarterback' and 'the brain'!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::gasp::
Will Kurama and Hiei tell each other their feelings? Will they be able to get around Maya and Muruko? Will I ever sign in?
Will Kurama and Hiei tell each other their feelings? Will they be able to get around Maya and Muruko? Will I ever sign in?
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo. love this fic! its so great. i feel bad for poor maya. i hope hiei and kurama get back together soon.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Its sweet and bitter.. .Bittersweet! Its beautiful and loving Your stories always keep me interested
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that you finally updated this story. I've been checking to see it you updated it constantly. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen between Hiei and Kurama next. Please update soon.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here. Please get them together soon. Great chapter, I hope you don't make us wait so long for the next one. Update soon.