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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Believe me! I dont take them wrong!
I will work over the last one again, sometimes somthing sounds good to me and later I find out when I read it that it is just the opposite of before!
Darn it, I work over them sooo often but I find ever something new to correkt!
I will work over the last one again, sometimes somthing sounds good to me and later I find out when I read it that it is just the opposite of before!
Darn it, I work over them sooo often but I find ever something new to correkt!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are several spelling and grammer mistakes BUUUT as English is not your native tounge and you do usually fax and get a beta that will be overlooked.
After all I LIKE this idea. This prolouge has made me laugh and promises to be a funny story.
After all I LIKE this idea. This prolouge has made me laugh and promises to be a funny story.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAHHHH!!!
I just proved that even for someone that is a native speaker of English can and do make mistakes !__!
That was suppose to reas that you usually FIX (not fax, silly me!) the mistakes.
I just proved that even for someone that is a native speaker of English can and do make mistakes !__!
That was suppose to reas that you usually FIX (not fax, silly me!) the mistakes.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you do make mistakes, but Altar says that reviews are unredeemable because you can't go back and change them. You're okay Katzztar! ^__^
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you two!
Somtimes my revs are more fun to read as my stories!
But thanks anyway, I will overloock this one once again, grumble, I thought I had the most but well...
Love you two!
Somtimes my revs are more fun to read as my stories!
But thanks anyway, I will overloock this one once again, grumble, I thought I had the most but well...
Love you two!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang it. Why can't I stay logged in forever? Never mind. Don't call the readers perverts! Shizuru seemed somewhat OOC but I don't care! *sticks out her tongue at herself* Yeah! Poor Kazuma-kun!