rate_review Reviews

This stories very good. I think you should write it as an inset you story though.
You know the stories where the readers are actually in the story.
Update soon! ^__^

Y'know, 'cause my "friend" got into trouble for offering CC, I do believe I will back down. I will say this though, your mechanics are near-perfect.

Well your grammar and spelling are perfect. I applaud you for making an effort to staying true to OCs as opposed to MS. I look forward to seeing these characters develop and become OCs! Nothing more...good luck with your story hun. You have a good start.


To Green Knight: am I the "friend"? And if I am...how come I get quotes? *cries loudly*

I was talking about Altar 'cause she had real life issues that caused us to not be so friendly in chatrooms. Soem thign about a girlfriend. Email me.

Some omitted words, but who hasn't done that? *waits for the next chapter patiently*