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lol Love the ending,hate the couple,but I read it anyway and I can't stop laughing at the ending

LOL I loved the story and especially the ending. This was so funny... *falls out of her recliner and busts out laughing again* Do you plan to write any more?

Wonderful fic. Finally some het in this place!!

How can this pairing be so unloved? I can't see that Yukina really got what Kuwabara tried to explain her about love, but I loved reading this.

About the too explicit things, not a problem. Women can... squirt like that. I saw it happening in some... movies... Gaaahhh!!! Pervert get awaaaay!!!

Yukina is probably pregnant after this... they didn't use protection! It calls for a sequel where Hiei doesn't kill Kuwabara.

It read just like a hentai video with the unreal amounts of bodily juices included. I'm more of a Shizuru/Yukina fan... Kazu/Yukina is just 0.o; to me now. I just don't see her ever understanding Kazu-kun.

*bashes the Green Knight over the head and drags her away* Hehehe...

Yea I do agree with the first reviewer that is what a tad to explicit but hell that does not mean it was any less good! Wonderful job! I am supposed to do a Kuwa/Yukina one as well...I just hope it will be as great as this! Good job once again!

Oh, that was the best KazumaxYukina lemon I ever read! Please make a other KazumaxYukina fic with lots of lemon!

Okay that's opinion on whether Kazuma dear is straight or not, but whatever. I myself would pair Kuwabara with anyone, male or female but Yukina because Yukina seems a little gay. I mean, there are a lot of things to consider about her.

Anyway, the oral sex scene was a little too unreal for me. Women don't... heh... gush like waterfalls or what have you to that affect! Kay. I can definitely see that you are a male writer, yes?

This website can help you if you are a guy: http://www.the-clitoris.com/n_html/nfr_index.htm

Bye!

P.S. I did somewhat enjoy the lemon.

That was really different. A bit too explicit at some points but still good.