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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :D I like how you're building things up here...how you're exploring emotion...I like exploring emotions...Keep up the good work :D
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can it be that you has post this once before here on fn?
I think I read it there before and found it good as I do now.
Please keep up the work, its really good so far!
I think I read it there before and found it good as I do now.
Please keep up the work, its really good so far!
schedule
September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far...but, you should still study, too ;) You're doing very well with this story, keep up the good work :D
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story...it's interesting...I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but the caps are a little ...ahhhhhhh! lol you know? What a lot of people do when the characters are thinking is put //thinking// or they put these 'thinking'. You could do that!^_^
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! w00t! Jin/Touya! Keep up the good work hun! Yay!