rate_review Reviews

I REALLY REALLY like this & can hardly wait for the next chapter. I must have read the 1st couple of chapters at least 4 times already & I just discovered this fic a few days ago.

I am really enjoying this story. You've crafted a believable world with characters that have depth and personality. I usually hate OCs, but yours compliments the story very nicely. Although I prefer to think of Kurama as a soft, protective sort (still fierce when cornered, of course), the roles you have put Kurama and Youko into are very different from what I have seen in other stories, and very interestng. I look forward to reading more when you post it!

Yes... I have been waiting for the web site to settle once more so that authors could start updating once again. This is one of the stories that I pay particular attention to when awaiting an update. Your story is very entertaining and I always look forward to the next chapter. So, when are the demons going to make an attempt to steal the silver rose? Soon I hope... although that may cause the end of the story and this one is too good to end that quickly. Humm? Maybe wait a few more chapters/pages then.

I'm glad that you updated. I really enjoy reading this story. Please update soon.

Loved this story line... your writing style rapidly drew me and keeps me coming back to check on any new chapters.

hmmm... your story has a very interesting version of Youko and Kuarama. While I prefer the gentler Kurama of the anime, I like your story's uniqueness. And it seems to me that the two are falling in love, ne? ^_~ Wouldn't it be interesting if Hikaru and Sai showed up, creating a nice triangle between Sai, Youko, and Kurama? A Youko torm between his first love and his present master? ^_~ Please keep up the good work!

*whines* i dunno when this was done or anything but i would really like to read more...ur writing style surprised me when i realised i actually like it. that's a complament cause i usually only find bad things. there were a couple places that need improvement but im just being nitpicky now. arigato for such wonderful writing though ^,^

Oh yay a new chapter. I like seeing the daily life play out. More please.

I really am enjoying the world you have created here. I hope to read more soon.

Having Shuuichi be the more aggressive personality is an interesting twist. I hope Youko finds some confidence soon in Shuuichi's regard for him and in his own abilities.