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by aelio

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. It's refreshing to see Kurama written as something other than the 130% sweet and loving "human" that he very obviously isn't.
person Fuzzy Eared (not signed in)
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was very interesting. It was a very different look at who Kurama is, but not what I would call inaccurate, though I am hard pressed to believe in this interpretation myself. The one line that confused me was "I want to burn his har" (or something like that). I was caught off guard by it because it didn't flow the way the rest of the story did and I wasn't entirely sure of the meaning you were trying to put behind it. Anyway, good job.
person Haa
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was just...fantastic. You did such a great job on the aspects, and the narrarating, and the point of view! It was just beautiful, and I wish to let you know that this was the -best- story I've read in a long while. Thank you so much, you're a great author!

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