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Hmm... It's rather interesting for a start. You could insert some flashbacks to define the background. I mean, what's happened before this scene. OH, and I'd like to know more about said silver-haired man. Yoko is really hot as far as I'm concerned... I'd like you to continue, it sounds like a promissing first fic. So, go on with it, I'm waiting for more.
Alex