rate_review Reviews

With your daily updates - I can't keep up with my reviews! (You know, you make us all look bad with all your prolific-ness). I'm enjoying this story more and more everyday. I would have never thought of making Koenma Yusuke's father, or Sensui Hiei's dad, but in the context of the story - it works, and it works well. Poor Shior though - like she needs the stress.

And those poor souls on ff.net - they didn't get the CRAZY HOT Yuusuke/Hiei lemon. Sorry, didn't mean to yell, but...yeah, that whole scene was hot. I read it twice (but then again, I have the hentai mind). I like how you're approaching their mutual fascination of Kurama slowly and carefully, it give the redhead the space he needs.

And your narrative just keeps improving.

Awesomely great lemon. Hiei is just to cute in this. I think after my Yusuke showed Hiei what making love is all about, I can see Hiei following Yusuke around like a little puppy, lol. I feel so sad for Kurama and what he's going through with his mom. It's good to know that he has Yusuke and Hiei by his side. I'm hoping we're getting a little closer to some more touchy/feely time with Kurama. Yusuke has sure shown a lot of maturity and patience. I can't wait for when Kurama is ready and willing. I'm sure it'll be hot as hell. Can't wait for more.

Hmm, well this is certainly unconventional. That's a good thing, I'm rather liking it so far... :)

Awesome chappy. Hm Yusuke better clean up his and hiei's mess before kurama finds it. I know I wouldn't want two guys I barely know fucking in my own home and not cleaning up the mess...mostly cause I am lazy but thats besides the point. Anyways, can't wait for the next update. bai bai

nice i can;t wait to see what others charcters are in the story

i absolutely love this. your yusuke and hiei characterizations are always the best. looking foward to your next update.

OMG, when this story started, I didn't really see the threesome thing coming, but now I'm doing a little happy dance (I'm so glad you decided to include Hiei in on the action!). Your voice in this story is really drawing me in, it becomes smoother with each chapter (not that it wasn't smooth before, but I can tell that this is flowing with more ease as you get further and further in). I really like where this is going and -hey - it's educational, I never really knew anything about track before!

I'm just bad. I would have SO taken advantage of Kurama while he was drunk, but I'm sure I would've had to get in line.

And - yeah - I coudn't get into aff.net all day yesterday, you weren't alone!

nice i like how yusuke and hiei didn't take advangtage of kurama. that shows there have some self control.

nice i like how yusuke and hiei didn't take advangtage of kurama. that shows there have some self control.

Ah, edited for ffn is it? Excellent [purrr]. "Noble and not so noble" is still my favorite phrase. I wasn't expecting this to go the threesome route, but if it didn't Hiei would have been left out in the cold, and we can't have that, can we ;-)?