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The good part? Now...from you, I will learn true evilness *wink* I learned the gore from Blue...lol

I loved the ceeremony...and the bachelor party. Nice little possessive hiyouki. Nice touch. And, here we are, Kurama tourture again. What more? hmmm... I gues the venom isn't going to corrupt the sample or can be spun out or something.

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You've watched Yami, haven't you? That thing...sounds a bit like Muraki's thing...though, there's a similar thing in YYH and X...the regeneration tank thing.

I had thoughts...but I'll wait to see :D Glad to see the muse is still feeding off the con *grins*

hey just wanted to tell you i luved all the stories i hav read so far and this one just as much. i cant wait to read more and i liked the fact you had the characters evolve through all of your stories it makes them seem more realistic in a sense. so keep up the great writing :D

MY BABY! ::Cries all over the unconscious Kurama:: That evil, vile, digusting spider! ::Whimpers and pets his hair and then hugs Hiei quickly:: Don't worry my beloved fire demon... you'll get to kick their butts!

Great chapter... all the happiness and then my baby being attacked. I think I felt my heart stop for a moment. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the wonderful work!

I'm not gonna say it....

No, I'm not...

Well, OK : ZE MAGICK HEALING COCK MAKES AN APPEARENCE - ALL IS RIGHT WITH THE WORLD!!!!!

You..only you could do that RIGHT in a fanfic. I worship you. BTW, like I said in LJ, the characterization of Mukuro is fine, just the right amount of distance. I also enjoyed Shiori's first few sentences in conversation with her husband, and Hiei's room is so right on. I loved the description of opulent but spartan.

Now I have to go pay aedictus royalties for MHC, she trademarked it after all.

Ah, updates. What's not to love? ^.^

This chapter was pretty good. I really like how you show Kurama and Hiei's love for each other more than their lust for each other. Like, even just now when they made love, it wasn't because they lusted after each other, it was just another way to show they cared. I really like that. One thing, I want to know what it was Hiei was about to say when Kurama stopped him in the shower. I'm assuming that (entire, probably) conversation came from the mini-con, but you really must finish Hiei's statement. Please!!

Update soon!

*grins*
“‘It’ doesn’t have any magical healing properties and I don’t want to hurt you,” Kurama protested half-heartedly.

Hiei pouted. “No Magic Healing Co...”

“Don’t even say it!” Kurama cut him off. “You know I hate that language.”
*grins*

How funny. Very funny....though...very curious...very very...hurry up and write, damn it...now! Or, I'll regret spreading teh_CRACK that is Princess Princess! I'd say more, but I have...stuff to do...and certain things are making that difficult.

Awesome Shiori seems to be getting lots of surprises keep it up its good.

Oh I hope you update soon. I always love your work and you never cease to keep me compulsively checking for updates. Evil.

I rarely frequent the YuYuHakusho section of aff.net, because I've never found anything appealing here. I stick to the Yugioh section. But then I found your fic, BUGS. I've been hooked ever since. I absolutely LOVE your writing. I was so excited to find a sequel AND prequel to BUGS. I read the prequel, and now I'm reading this. I finally have a reason to come to the YYH section of aff.net. I can't WAIT for an update!!!

^______^ Wooow. That was a real treat. I stumbled across this story 3 days ago, and the title immediately hooked me. But then I read the summary, and since it said it was the third in the series, and since I hate jumping into a storyline from the middle, I looked for the preceding story. I actually have seen Bugs on several fav lists of my other favourite K/H writers here on AFF.net, so I was glad I finally got around to reading it. And then I found that Bugs was a sequel itself, to the angsty epic (my favourite kind) Coming Clean, and I knew I'd found a treasure. ^^ I often end up finding lovely stories like this well after it's finished, so I get to do what I did last Sat, and spend the entire day enjoying it. And then I got to follow that up the next day with Bugs. Today I got to treat myself to Akambo, and so far I have not been disappointed. I absolutely adore how Hiei and Shiori were able to connect to an extent through the common ground of being one of Kurama's precious people. The characterizations I find are not entirely OOC because they've developed, as you yourself said, over quite a bit of plotline, which warrants those kinds of changes. I can't wait for the this story to continue, although I see you did just update, so I'll try and be patient. :) But, I can't wait! Akambo? Ankanbou! Baby baby baby babies!! <3 Sorry, I'm excited. Am I totally off in expecting weird genetically spliced KxH spawn?