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I've been waiting a long time for this and it was worth it. Very nicely done!

Oh, wow... I just read the first chapter, and it's SO BEAUTIFUL! That is a love scene. I think I'll wait a bit, savoring the warm glow that it is, before reading chapter two.

Love and lollipops!

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I just read ur entire story! It was a fabulous ending! how much would it take for u to make a sequel? Oh, I know! TWINCEST, along with the usual Kurama/yusukeness, threesome with twins and biki? hiei/kuwabara? I wanna know what happens 2 our boyz! both the twins and daddy's-ur the mastermind, i'm just throwing my 2 cents in, PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! i will love u forever! Yes boyz father is teaching daddy mouth to mouth-naked-in bed- *snort* *bursts into laughter*
LOVED! GREAT STORY-GREAT SMEX!

AAWWWW... amazing. At the last part when Biki was having it out with Yusuke I was like "shit, shit, shit" and like when Keiko was like abort the children I was all choked up... especially during the confrontation. Oh and during Kurama's confrontation with Hiei.

Oh don't know why but for reason while Yusuke and Kurama where in the cave I expected the kitsune to pounce him at any moment. Like out of nowhere he'll leap and they'll tumble into bed... I actually pictured a few times Kurama just watching Yusuke trying to get up when he was pregnant. It's like a turtle on its back.. so funny. I really enjoy this story and glad you made it. Ta ta.

Awww, It's really over? Can you make a sequel?

I loved it a lot! =)
That was just beautiful.
One of the best YYH that I've read.
^__^

Hey! I love your story!!!!
I loved the babies so much I'm making a picture of them to put on my Deviantart.com account.
Credit goes to you for the idea.

I hope you tell me how you feel about it!!!

My SN is Yami-no-Matsuei



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Toushikku

That just totally rawked XD I would like MORE! because it rawked yummy!

This has to be one of the all-time BEST YYH fanfics ever written. This was such an amazing story! I'm so pimping you in my LJ.

Really, I love your renditions of each and every character and the entire plot of this. It's incredibly original and something I could read over and over. Not to mention some parts are just plain hilarious! You did a great job on this! I'll be on the look-out for your next work.

Seriously, I thought this story was finished. What a pleasant suprise to find a hawt lemony scene for the epilogue! And the kits breaking in and watching them? I laughed too hard at that, they're SO Kurama's kits.

You have such a nice erotic flow to your lemons, you write like no one else does and it's always a pleasure to read. I hope I see more from you!