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for Eye of the Beholder

by KyoHana

schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute. I'm glad aff finally let me in so that I could read it! First off, I love the setting, I read too many fantasy novels not to love the setting. I also like the tone in which you tell the story, you use great words like "braggart" which keep it running right alongside the setting. I can't wait to see how you write Hiei.

And your description of Keiko was awesome.
person hColleen
schedule May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like period pieces, though I've not the patience to work through the grammar/verbage...or at least not keep it up through a story. I look forward to seeing where it goes :D Yays :D
person Josie
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I mean REALLY good. I love the style and I love that its not another beauty and the beast parody thats making fun of Kuwabara. Please write another chapter soon. Like now soon? Please? Maybe? Yes?

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