rate_review Reviews

Definantly up to the high standards that I have come to expect from anything you write.

I decided to review here because there was whining on LJ AND I'm STILL thinking about this story...and I read it, like, 4 days ago.

Hottest things EVAR:
-Hiei in a maid costume....garters and corsets and heels, OH MY
-Yusuke beating Hiei with a riding crop...A RIDING CROP...yeah, just find EVERYONE'S kink!
-Hiei saying "Fuck me" while looking at Kurama...gyah..nosebleed...
-Kurama tapping Yusuke in the dick and telling him to watch while he gives pointers on how to use a riding crop...ON HIEI.
-Hiei bent over the desk...twice
-Um....the whole threesome...you broke my brain...lots.

Really, Lunar_Eclipse asked me in my still-to-be-answered interview questions to list the 5 hottest lemons I've ever read and this is defintely one of them. It's going to be a requirement for you to write 2 months of angst if the pr0n after that comes out like this!

You have no idea how eager I was to review this after cleaning up the gooey(sp?) remains of my mind off the keyboard. Wow. I mean, if that's how you write when you forget the plot then it's no wonder your fics are heart stopping when they're thoroughly planned out. My thoughts for this fic were as follows:

~_~ ---------> O_o: OMG! Hiei! Acting coy!! Dressed Up as a Maid!!! Holy Hell!! -------------> o_O: What the hell is Yusuke wearing? That's so crazed. ----------> ^o^ (cheering): Spanking is fun!! Hooray for kinky boys! -----------> O_O: (part when Hiei is begging for it) .............Damn, that so frickin' HAWT! ............ -------------> O_O: (the part when Yusuke's giving it to Hiei) ............. Can I be next? Please? ------------> *__* (bowing down to Kurama's greatness while he's teaching Yusuke) You can be my lord and master anytime. Just say the word. --------------> @_@ (the part when Yusuke does both of them) All thought processes have shut down temporarily. Please come back @ another time.

Needless to say. I enjoyed this very much. Rock on. ^__^

~Devious

im glad that you brote the story here

As always this was a wonderful set up. Extremely hot, now I want a turn at spanking that pretty little apparition. You may want to consider passing out towels at the door whenever someone comes in to read your stories. I must go dry out my keyboard now ;) Keep up the good work.