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Wow... Thats all I can say.

This was so cute and sweet and hot. I loved that is was Keiko to him and his surprised lack of response, very in character. You write Hiei very well and I loved the mix of sex and emotions, it was perfect. I also liked Hiei spooning, so very cute and his line at the end was great. I like this very much, you are a great writer.

Wonderful one-shot dear, love this pairing. Though I prefer Keiko with anyone than Yusuke. They just aren't a romantic couple in my opinion, no spark there. Which is why you'll probably never see me stick her with him, or him with her. Nope, she needs a man that will throw her ass on the bed and fuck her good. Teach her who wears the fucking pants in the relationship. A hot lemon, keep up the good work. *Hands you naked pics of Aoshi*