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for OH BABY!

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great getting two chapters at once but please don't hurt Kurama's babies anymore. A little scare would be okay but don't let anything happen to either of them or Hiei's babies for that matter. Update soon.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sort of expected that to be happening with hatanaka... rat bastard.... Still love your stories and I try to review when I can. ^^ keep on writing for your fans -hides the yaoin fanboy shirt he's wearing- ^^;;
person tori
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY, two chapters! Your update just made my day so much less hellish! Which means you have succeded where perscription narcotics have failed! ive yourself a pat on the back...not too hard though.
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for two updates. Can I have the next update now please? I love the way you make Kurama so emotional and I really hope (please don't berate me for this) that you continue his emotional suffering over losing his daughter. I like it that Shuichi/Kurama "Perfect" Minamino, isn't as perfect as he seems. And I'm glad Shiori is more understanding...just remember to kill Hatanaka for me!

Update Soon!

Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first of all great chapters. second of all i had a sinking feeling kurama was carrying another kid just wasnt sure how many and i thought that was cool. i cant wait to find out what happens next especially that cliffy you had for the next chapter. XD
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Kurama's still having twins. I so hope they get a girl or two in the bunch for him. Great chapters. Update soon.
person kerryann
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok,wow.It was great to see koemna happy for them for a change.AndI'm glad to see Shiori is comfortable at their house.It'll be fun to see her with a demon lover.Boy is her hubby in for it .Very well done and now on to the next chapter(loud cheers)
person kerryann
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 was an eye opener at the very least.Though I'm very happy for thwm ,Kurama and Hiei are reallly going to have their hands full now.Poor Shiori doesn't want to go home and both Hiei and Kurama are in no shape to help with this right now so I wonder ehat happens next.Will Bulma and her family help?Great job and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wanna take a guess! The baby that Kurama 'terminated' is still alive but when Bulma tells them they'll worry the baby is seriously hurt...yet it's also a blessing as Kurama didn't terminate the other and therefore Hiei will not feel resentment towards his mate when his child/children are born! I hope that made sense...

Update Soon!

Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
person tori
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hope Shiori divorces Hatanaka,

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