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Awesome story. I'm doing a little catching up since I've missed the last couple of updates. I just wanted to point out quick that in chapter 11 you put 'colorized' when Hiei burned Toushi's wound closed. The actual term for that is 'cauterized'. Ok, going back to reading now.

Alright sorry I was too lazy to log in.. but come on...it's your story and I had to leave a review. I had been away for a while and was pleased to come back to lots of chapters to read from you AND OMG ARE THEY EVER WORTH IT! Anyway the main reason I wanted to review was the chapter you were unsure of... personally I say...

*Pauses writing to begin to applaud her*

Brava... I am very proud of you. I had a feeling it was something like that and I must say I applaud you. Here is why. I have noticed many writers (Including myself *Looks ashamed* ) always tend to think about their readers first... and exclude something from their stories because of it, something that really needs to be put into the story. What happens? Happy Readers, Unhappy Author. Though we write to appease our fans, we also have to remember the reasons we write... because WE love to be the CREATOR of a story.. WE love to write... it is us who put our heart and souls into our stories... and I applaud you for not shying away from the chapter and leaving it for your eyes only. Personally I think it makes a hell of a lot of sense and I'm glad you included it.

I know it seems like I know how this feels and it is because I do... one of my fanfictions here I've gotten more flames for than anything else I ever wrote... it's a rape story and a Band fiction. (I will not say the name due to no desire for a shameful plug) but I made one of my favorite singers out to be a rapist and a woman beater. Fans of the same man once left me horrible emails and reviews... some asking how I can claim to be a fan. People forget this is FICTION and that we don't BELIEVE the people are like this... and that we also don't condone anything we write about. It is a hard pill to swallow to get a review that rips into you for using your creativity and the way you wrote the following chapter I truly hope you have been spared the pain. I loved all of the chapters and I look forward to reading your next one. Keep up the awesome work and stay true to your muse... never let fear of your audience make you question your writing.

Aqualyne.

You're such a damn tease. I'm glad things are alright with Kurama and Shiori. It's cool that she's going to be there to help with the kids. Update soon.

Oh wow,what a chapter and worth the wait.Boy,is Hatanaka going to get it (I hope)Kurama may want to but what if it was Hiei that hurt him,oh boy what fun he could have and not even lay a finger on him with his demon eye.I can picture her being very protective of both her boys while in their condistion as well.Plus Shiori now has a love interrest in the demon world.This is getting really good and I can't wait for the next update.I'm wondering if the surprise is still twins for Kurama?

I 'm glad that Kurama and Hiei got through to Shiori, she had some valid points, but she isn't the parent.

this is great thanks

eventhough i found it a little risky given the demon nature and overall tone of the stories i think it wasnt too bad what they did was harmless and im sure everyone would agree with me in saying that whats done is done as long as they didnt have actual sex.but i really must applaud you for the warnings they are very much appreciaated

eventhough i found it a little risky given the demon nature and overall tone of the stories i think it wasnt too bad what they did was harmless and im sure everyone would agree with me in saying that whats done is done as long as they didnt have actual sex.but i really must applaud you for the warnings they are very much appreciaated

Good chapter. I'm glad Kurama and Hiei stuck to their guns about what they believe is right for their children. To say Shiori got a rude awakening is an understatement but at least she realized it and relented. Update soon.

WOw,nothing like setting poor Shiori straight the hard way.A hard chapter but a needed one non the less,when cooler heads prevail what happens now,there are so many ways to raise children and not all are agreed on.Demons would be no different.Very well done,I can't wait for the next chapter.