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by ShioriFoxiesMom

person Kerbear
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice finish!! And I can't wait for what else you have instore for us.
person hpgryffin
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That went too easily for my taste and Kurama, what the hell was he doing running after Hiei and Yusuke!! Anyway, I don't mean to be disrespectful or anything, but I'm not going to lie and say I liked the turn of events. Still, I enjoyed the story so much before this. So, thank you! I have always been following your stories, but I still don't like this chapter. *chuckles* I hope you would write another story after this because I would really love to read about it.
person Kerbear
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright!! Its about time Kurama woke up (or something)but what is he going to do to them with that purple flower?I can't wait to find out.Youko taking charge could be alot of fun,I hope you update soon
Great job
person Fox Trot
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You make me so happy! I adore your story and can't wait to see what is going to happen next
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Why'd you have to leave a cliffie? Can't wait to see Kurama unveil his "dominance" to the other two. *cackles like mad* love it!

Update soon please?

Snow
person Shuichi
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hells yeah man! Take over Kurama! I lurve a dominant kurama XD you rawk. I hope you finish this story and make more like this. Its so sweet and romantic!
person DYquem
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.K. I'm writing this after chapter 10 and before I read Chapter 11. I'm about to get really harsh with Kurama, who, IMO, is very OOC, but that part is o.k. His personality is as you want him to be. At this point I agree with Yusuke. It is Kurama's fault. Not that he is doing this deliberately, but he is being so insecure and emotionally dysfunctional, Yusuke is right to walk away. It is, IMO, up to Kurama if he wants to try to salvage a relationship with either or both. Kurama doesn't seem capable of truly loving either Hiei or Yusuke, not in any real sense, since he simply can't get beyond his emotional problems, despite the best that Yusuke and Hiei tried to help him. Kurama is so irrationally focused on his imagined fears of losing one, as well as his incredible selfishness in saying "I want you both but I don't want you to more than tolerate each other," that he has brought his own fears into reality. They have made it clear they love him desperately, but at some point they have to protect their own emotional well being and say "enough is enough. We tried our hardest and it just isnt happening." He is going to lose both of them, except that you tend to write happy endings, if I recall, so they will probably all end up together. However, I hope you make Kurama go through some realistic soul searching, self awareness and groveling before that happens.
person Sweetnsexy89
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAH!! YOKO'S BACK! UPDATE SOON!!!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sad and angsty... Just what the good doctor ordered!

Please update soon! *hugs and sexy bishonen pairings*

Snow
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn man. that's all i can say. damn. update soon and great chapter. damn

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