rate_review Reviews

more!
poor kurama...yusuke just forget about keiko!

damn this is good. poor kurama i hope he gets the relationship he deserves in the end. looking foward to the next update

Hey! This story is kinda' sad so far. What with Kurama being in love with Yusuke and all.
Okay, so I got this idea, it's just a suggestion, but could maybe make Yusuke realize that he doesn't really care for Keiko. Personally, I hate- and I MEAN hate- Keiko, I totally agree with what Hiei said about her being annoying. Also, when Kurama said that it would only be a few years before Yusuke'd have to leave the Makia anyway-cause he wouldn't age- that would be a great thing for Yusuke to contemplate.
I also really like how hiei and Koenma are together, you don't see that very often, that's for sure.
Yeah, so anyway, your story is really awesome-even with only one chapter- so keep up the good work!
hugs & kisses

Katonie

oh wow. That was too excellent. Please update a.s.a.p.

I got to admit that I was rather hesitating due to the Hiei/Koenma pairring, but it was actually good. You definitely got me hooked^_^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Hot, hot, hot. Can't wait for the next chapter, not many seem to want to tackle Yusuke/Kurama while the detective's still with Keiko, and the guilt factor is making things so much more delicious. I hope you keep writing and posting.

wow me like alot

Wow, that was a wonderful chapter. You defintely have me hoooked and waiting for more!