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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And just why did you do that to Kurama? I was laughing at a lot of parts, til I read this chapter.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I'm amanda1, just was too lazy to sign in)
Awwww, see that was much better. I loved the whole story except the other chapter I reviewed.
Awwww, see that was much better. I loved the whole story except the other chapter I reviewed.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! The last paragraph was so cute! The whole story was very good. It kept everyone in character and progressed at a good pace. I liked how Shiori and Kazuya were able to understand and accept Kurama's secrets and his mating with Hiei. And I love how Hiei decided to sleep ON Kurama. I'm glad they worked out their misunderstandings and will have a powerful future in Makai. Great story!
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Guess I'm #100. Yeah! I love your story. I just wished it continued until after Kurama marked Hiei. But great ending none the less. I feel sorry for the only two straight guess in the group that must have been unsettling.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T i hated to see this end. this really is a great story and you truly are a talented writer. so how about a part two. ya know, one of them in makai starting their demon lives together. come on, you know you want to write it. ^_^
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I barely ever leave one of these, but I felt the need to, well I have for a while. I loved it. I wish the ending was longer but it was a really good fic. I hope to see more of yours soon, and even if I do not review, I am always looking forward to reading your stuff.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can see a great deal of improvement when comparing this story to your earlier ones. The writing style has matured.
I loved this tale. Very sweet and bittersweet. Hopefully, we'll get to read more Kurama/Hiei stories from you in the future!
I loved this tale. Very sweet and bittersweet. Hopefully, we'll get to read more Kurama/Hiei stories from you in the future!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I am kinda sad that it is over though. Oh well, nothing lasts forever.
I look forward to your next story.
I look forward to your next story.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good ending ;o;
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end this story.Leaving me craving for more of their adventures.I believe you have to be one
of the best Kurama/Hiei writters out there.Though i wish there was still more to this story I look forward
to what else you have in store for them.
Great job
of the best Kurama/Hiei writters out there.Though i wish there was still more to this story I look forward
to what else you have in store for them.
Great job