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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I love it so far. I can't wait to see what comes next. Hurry and put up the next chapter.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I love it so far. I can't wait to see what comes next. Hurry and put up the next chapter.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeeaahh!!!! Everything is coming together and Kurama's parents were so accepting!! But they really shouldn't spy on private moments, though that is a parents progiative.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure what to say about Chap. 9. I just reread it and something seemed off to me. I noticed in your notes at the top of the page that you were not really pleased with it either. I am not sure what it was that I didn't like.. I know that is not much help to you as a writer. Maybe Hiei talked to much or Kurama was...different. The flow was nice though. Sorry I can't explain better...(It's why I don't post my own drabbles.) But I am loving the story and can't wait to see the relationship form between K&H and let's not forget Y&K. I am loving their side story.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.. ;-; That was so... sad? No.. er.. Painful would be a better word for it. =( I can't wait until you write more.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay then, so it's actually more like the Jagan raped Kurama as punishment--I can actually fathom that. Shiori and Kazuya ... I found a little odd, but probably only because ... *shrugs* Not sure, but it doesn't matter, it was still entertaining. So, then, shall Kurama be sharing anything with them in the next chapter? I'll wait around to find out ^_^
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this story is going and that Kurama and Hiei are working things out. I've got to wonder what they are going to find in Tourin though. Please update again.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a rollercoaster ride!! I feel so sorry for Kurama and I can completely understand his feelings.
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good work! In a way I saw this coming, but I refused to admit the possibility of it. The thing that really has me wondering is...how can Hiei have forgotten what he himself did to his fox? Amnesia selective shock-induced or something?
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eh--So, Hiei raped Kurama, but didn't remember it? Well, my theory's down the drain, I was thinking maybe there was a scar from the time he stabbed him in the stomach *shrugs* Well now, the way it ended, it looks like the injury will be explained right off next chapter--RIGHT? ^__^ I'll be waiting.