rate_review Reviews

Woooooooo, Yusuke's having triplets!

hmm... I'm liking this story. Very interesting! I can't wait for an update!

Its sweet, plz continue

Okay, surprisingly this is pretty interesting. Usually, Mpregs are not my cup of tea, but fortunately, Yusuke is ^_^ I'm curious to see how this all unfolds. Keep up the good work.

This is a great start and I can't wait to see where you take this.

Overall, I think that you did a great job. I like the story and it should be interesting to see yusuke out of his normal kick-ass characteization with the way you portray his pregnancy zapping most of his powers. This could lead to some sticky situations. I did notice some grammar mistakes that interrupted reading (i.e. having to go back a re-read a sentence to make sense of it), but that is easily fixed with a beta. I look forward to the next chapter!