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for Captured!

by 66Hiei08

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did you erase your reviews? I know you added them in the 39th chapter, but they would have stayed right there for you. Well, whatever you please. Onto the actual review part:

I really enjoyed this story. The ending was in line with the rest of the story. I'm glad the cavalry got its act together in time to avoid even worse humiliations for our boys. But you've left a big, old cliffhanger at the end of the story! there is so much just hanging out there right now without closure! I'm dying to start reading the sequel. And while I loved your quick updates, you've now spoiled your readers and made us crave them even more! I can't wait to see what happens in the next installment(s).

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