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for If Only in My in Dreams

by geeclock

schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am in awe of your skills. Very well done!
person rheanen
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is the best fanfiction i have ever read youshould write another
person 66Hiei08
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I found this to be an interestingly different story. Very creative.
person Bookai
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic story, one of the best I've ever read, and I've been reading fanfics for about five years! I suggest a nice hot demonic threesome tho! Thanks for the great read, please finish epilemon!
person amanda1
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. I really enjoyed it
person Tisha.
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im serously going to cry if this isn't upsdated soon. Its the only thing thats made me smile alll day!(I've had a really bad day.) Pleaseeee update sooon?
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story, very interesting, can't wait to find out what happens next
person Sumiremomo
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of this story! I'm now actually considering reading the Dreamland series. Lol looked it up and everything. The only complaint I have is that you (or your beta) need to spend a little more time on the editing. It's not horrible, it's just simple grammar and spelling errors. I must commend you, though! You have a better vocabulary than most!
person Minamino
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I can't wait!

But wow to Hiei! Good for him for getting a wolf-dog-like-in-description-thingy guy and having good sex and all that good stuff. ^^ And that is just so cute that he named the cat Kazuma. n_n

I just can't wait for more!
person Minamino
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Thank goodness you're ok! >.< Those things are scary...


Okie dokey... So, your grammar and stuff has gotten a bit better. Although, just to let you know, when a character is speaking, and it goes on for at least two paragraphs, then you have to continue to quote it.

"Kinda like...
"This."

^_^

Now for the real review. There wasn't enough stuff in this chapter! I wanted MORE. >:3 Yes, more! How is dear Hiei doing, I wonder? And that Fucking Plant... was evil. *pout* Poor Yusuke.

So yes, that is that. ^_^

Hope to see more soon!

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