rate_review Reviews

I really like how you're having Yusuke encountering difficulty with his heritage. Makes this a lot more realistic. And wonder of wonders, there's an actual plot! That's not meant in a sarcastic manner BTW. It's so refreshing to see a story on here with an idea behind it. I like how the boys are explaining demon culture. Koenma should make another appearance after Hiei's mating. There would probably be a change in his aura or energy and the Spirit World might be able to sense it. And being the paranoid freaks they are, they'd have to investigate. I think Yusuke should take some time in the Makai, it might make him level out some. A lot of demons in any universe seem to be geared towards 3 things; fighting, food and sex. I believe Yusuke is in a rather severe need of the third part of the triangle.

oohh this story keeps gettin better with each chapter

Your story is amazing i cant wait for u to update u have a way with words :)

I'm so tired right now since I haven't slept the entire night yet I still couldn't leave before reading your latest chapter, and I want you to know that I am really enjoying your fic, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

OH MAN MIKA I JUST READ SO MUCH OF THIS. IT'S SO FUCKING AMAZING.

I have no complaints about the porn. And I love the slice-of-life stuff within a greater plot. I'm also glad that you addressed Kurama's problem - the whole explanation of his consciousness and the souls in one body was really nicely written.

Kuwabara commenting on Yusuke's hickey was alkshlhashal funny. And now back to the porn - it's crazy and hot and they do all kinds of dirty stuff to each other and I love it. There you go.

And Yusuke now has a mommy that cares about how he likes his tea! *squee*

mmm, delicious as always. It's ok Yusuke, you'll get used to it eventually, until then, I'll keep cackling. XD

I love this story! I litterally look for updates all the time ^_^ I just love how you do all three characters and I am eagerly awaiting more!
Please update soon!

-till then!

love it

As much as I love your Shiori and your sense of characters, the "Hiei also can produce tear gems" and "demon bite marks are love" things are a mite cliche. I hope you can work with them into something original, though.

It is four in the morning. You...I got sucked into this story and I'm about to crash, but damnit! I wanted to read it all! And I did. I want to read more. *grabs blankets and settles in to wait* *pulls out Yusuke, Kurama and Hiei plushies to cuddle*