rate_review Reviews

I am a bit skeptical, because sometimes the author-made character is very annoying and frustrating to deal with. So far, however, I find it interesting. I have become more open to younger author-made characters ever since Salome Sensei did this very interesting story about Sesshomaru buying a bastard half-brother of his named Sage. I like the story so far and I wish you luck with the next chapter. It is hard to get readers to warm up to author-made characters, which is probably a reason why this story does not have very many views or comments. I think, though, that using the classical fable of the boy who cried wolf and doing a twist on it helps the reader to be more open to Alex. I'm really curious as to what Youko will do to the boy. I wish you the best of luck with this story and I hope you will update soon!

I liked it :D. It seems to be an enjoyable story... But I have one issue with it... The giant paragraph DX. Its hard to keep track of what I read while reading. If you seperate it, I'm sure everyone will like it too... Just some friendly advice :D. Update soon ok?

~ Rose