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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know why more people don't write for this pairing in YYH, it such an obvious choice for some serious kink.
Your response to the Spring Kink challenge was good and I thought the variation on the TOP/bottom theme was a nice twist. The only suggestion I'd have would be that at a few points I got lost on the visual positioning. Such as how did Sensui have a hold on the nipple clamp chain? How did Itsuki climb off Sensui (at the end) when I thought Sensui had him bent forward?
Other than that I thought it was quite good.
Your response to the Spring Kink challenge was good and I thought the variation on the TOP/bottom theme was a nice twist. The only suggestion I'd have would be that at a few points I got lost on the visual positioning. Such as how did Sensui have a hold on the nipple clamp chain? How did Itsuki climb off Sensui (at the end) when I thought Sensui had him bent forward?
Other than that I thought it was quite good.