rate_review Reviews

Awesome chapter.

I like the idea of your plot and I never read a fic where the OC was a dude. So very interesting.

Love it. Wish I knew how hiei and kurama and yusuke became mates so early

Ha ha recover! Oh I love you!

This story is good! Writing with an OC as the main is always a challange. I think you handled Ryuu just right. He's interesting, but he doesn't overshadow the cannon characthers. Love the pre-existing relationship Y/K/H. Cute and funny. Well conceved plot; good exacution. But is it over? A TBC ot THE END at the end of a chapter is always helpful. If there is one peice of advise I can give; use transitional scentences when shifting from one set to another, time laspes, or flashback/forwards. -_-_- can easy be overlooked when you're really into a story, so the reader my not realize the scene has changed and they get confused. Keep writing, you've got it going on and you'll only get better.

Interesting..can't wait to read more.