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February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic. it is very well thought out!
I tried reviewing your first chapter 3 times, but each one resulted in an error. hopefully, this review gets through.
There were a lot of amusing moments. One of the ones that had be bust out laughing was when the keeper asked "Are you trying to pick a fight with me or come on to me, because I’m getting mixed signals? For the record, I’d be amiable to either.” Haha
I like the way you represented the 'seven dwarfs', very creative. it actually reminded me of raven's, from teen titan, various personalities. I look forward to your next chapter
I tried reviewing your first chapter 3 times, but each one resulted in an error. hopefully, this review gets through.
There were a lot of amusing moments. One of the ones that had be bust out laughing was when the keeper asked "Are you trying to pick a fight with me or come on to me, because I’m getting mixed signals? For the record, I’d be amiable to either.” Haha
I like the way you represented the 'seven dwarfs', very creative. it actually reminded me of raven's, from teen titan, various personalities. I look forward to your next chapter
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February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue this story. it looks amazing.