schedule
July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fo fao far!! I have to know what happens!! Please, post chapter 3 sooon!!
schedule
July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story so far! I cant wait till you get chapter 3 up! I have one critique for you though; try to use the proper tenses. You keep switching past and present tense verbs and it sometimes gets confusing. A beta might be able to help with this. Otherwise great job!