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for Sweet Release

by Ravenx

person Mija
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thats sooooooooo meannnnnnnnnnnnn.........sniffles I want MORE..........please??? can u update soon pretty please??? and if its not to much trouble since I dont visit this site much can you email me at BusinessMija@aol.com?? if not soo k will check back........but would love to read it as soon as it come up..:-) ty ty huggs Mija
person VW
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You had better continue. Please i beg of you.
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... so kawaii! *gigles like a silly school girl* *realises she IS a silly school girl* ^_^;; Anyway, I thought the poem was sweet, in a threatening sort of way ^_~. My fave kind.

Much *evil* love,
Chie
person Everqueen
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiei's poetic nature emerges. A bit unexed. ed. I review to read more. Keep them coming.
person JesPaiTha
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww that was ALL so cute! I just absolutly love the chapter. The poem wasn't THAT bad. Atleast it described Hiei perfectly. Please continue!
person animekid
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah well, to me you're not evil, (I'm a fanfic writer too!) *sigh* I like waff sweet parts! *tries not to gush* K/H and H/K all the way! Hehe, unlike other reviewers, I'm not hoping for the lemon; I just want to see how the relationship goes! Keep on writing please!
person Araki_Kae
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this, it is really good.
person Everqueen
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, come on, more chapters please. i really liked this story. Can't wait to read more.
person Tanzina&Mikana
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing!!! Continue, continue!!! Me like, me like!!!!! Hiei's adorable!!!! Kurama's hot!!!! Scratch that, they're both hotttttt!!!!!!!!!!! Write more soon!!!!!
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh the meanness! You must continue. Hiei is SO KAWAII! Awww.... poor Kurama, it was only a dream..... *sigh*....

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