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The Wish
(This one is not a beta version by now)Please remember my native speech is German.
This is my first try to write an entire chapter in English down
without have written it out before in German, yay!
It took full five
hours to get the entire thing readable! I really hope
it is so, if not, please telling me that!
More so, please tell me
if it is better, I return to the other way I have worked before, I need your
responses to get better with this.
But to be true I have the feeling it
sounds more right, when I write it down in English from the start.
Tina chan, I will sent
this one to you in the next days, if you want me to do so, I think it is better
to separate the works from you and Altar chan, so it give no problems.
Please tell me, ok?
Suryallee
Chapter
3
Right after Keiko arrived at her home, she
clamped her hands on her mouth.
`How has every one of my wishes come true? ` She thought, `This can not really
happen to me!
Ok, think girl, think!
What have you done since yesterday what you do
not normally? Better, what has happened into the last weeks what have to be out
of the normal routine? `
The young woman thought silently about
everything that happened the last two days.
Every time stopping her from speaking it loudly
out, so not another wish could escape her and harm her friends.
Then suddenly, she remembered the conversation
of her two friends.
Keiko had fully forgotten about the theme the
two discussed before she greeted them! That got her hands from her mouth,
“Yoko had tried WHAT???”
. Keiko was fuming and blushing. The dammed
Kitzune was on his way to seduce her!
For the first time after she found out about
her unusual little gift, Keiko used it on purpose;
“I wish, Yoko would
fall in love with the most unusual person who cross his path for only one
single day and would not be able to perform anything naughty the whole time!
And I wish also that he knew the whole time
that it is a lection for him and that he can remember everything after it!”
She sighted and sits back down on her bed,
“ I only wished that Hiei san is not to angry
with me when he finds out that it was I who have done that to him, I didn’t
wanted it on purpose, I only wanted him and Yukina to be happy.
Oh no! I did it again!”
“I am sure *he* got the message!”
Suddenly Hiei’s smuck voice was to hear; it came
from Keiko’s window behind her, and startled the shit out of the scarred woman.
“So, you were that, surely you want to know now
what happened after all your… little wishes. And don’t worry about my revenge
on you, I think I found a minute ago something much better as that!”
Hiei gave her one of his favourite smirks
before he hopped into her room and closed her window right after that.
It was oblivious to Keiko that the fire
apparition must plan something and wondered silently if she really wanted to
know just that!
After the jagon master has told her everything
from the events into the last hours she had accidentally
caused with her wishes: Keiko found her back, much to her surprise, silently
laughing with the most unusual person from she ever has thought she would do
that with!
Hiei was silently glad.
He not only had now his sister knowing without
him breaking his promise to Shigure, no he found also out by the way, that the
detectives woman had a interesting and amusing imagination about her revenges!
Slowly he began to understand what had drowned Yusuke
to her all the time.
He would not have been on her bad side now, as
Yoko managed it to be with ease.
He only hoped he could watch the proud Kitzune
when it happened to him!
More so, Hiei had seen her ring glow shortly
right after she spoke out her wish.
After a few questions, Hiei and Keiko knew that
the ring must have to do with this all somehow.
Suddenly a naughty smile creep on Hiei´s
normally stony features: and he scarred Keiko immensely with it.
“I will not wish anything bad with it Hiei san!”
she told him sternly, but to her surprise, the demon just nodded.
“I know that.
However, you do realise the Reikei will take this
ring from you, into the very same second they will find it out? Wouldn’t it be
not better you would do something against it before they will surely do that?”
Keiko looked at the, in her opinion strange
acting yokai uncertainly: what had Hiei in his mind?
“I only mean you should bind it on you and you
only.
Therefore, no one other as you can use it! I
know you well enough to know, that you will not live with the consequences if
someone other use the ring to cause harm with it to us all!”
Hiei looked at her. She shows on her face a
look of confusion and a little mistrust. He could perfectly understand her
behave. Keiko was the last person who had a point to trust him. Not after, he
had once kidnapped her.
He stood up and faced her.
“I assure you Keiko, I understand your mistrust
in my person completely, but you must do something about this ring.”
With that, Hiei removed his bandana and
infiltrated her mind before she could react.
He did no harm to her; Hiei only showed her
something about himself and her.
After a short wile, Hiei closed his third eye
again.
Right as he had suspected it, the ring had
protected the girl the entire time from have, her mind absorbed into his jagon.
“Amazing…” he silently whispered and looked to
the now silent girl to his right.
Keiko was now completely stunned and confused
at the same time.
She never would have thought that the silent
and short-tempered yokai considered her as something near to his sister!
On top of that, that she would have been death
right now if this was not so.
If she was the girlfriend of Yusuke: or not!
Hiei had killed her.
Now she could understand his so unusual behave
against her all the times better. She has ever wondered why…
“Why?”
Hiei only shake his head,
“I don’t
know. Maybe it is because you never tried to do any harm to my person…
Maybe it is because you were ever nice to
everyone including myself.
I really don’t know.”
He confessed after awhile thinking about it.
It was hardly to hear for Keiko because Hiei
spoke so low.
It seems to give Hiei an uneasy feeling to do
this. He constantly looked nervously over his shoulders, that nobody other
would hear him telling her this.
Keiko nodded and decided to let it fall for
this time, Hiei would tell her why when he wanted it. Until then, she would
simply relish his rare gift and do what he told her.
She knew, it was for
her best.
She thought very serious about Hiei’s request,
then, after awhile the young woman nodded and began to tell Hiei what she had
in mind.
The demon smirked at her choose of words, he
knew that Koenma and the Reikei would have a major problem to get the ring from
her after this wish!
More so, he would make sure that Keiko had
enough protection to live out the consequents after the spirit realm found out
about this treasure.
His only problem would be the detective.
Yusuke would not like his little plans for her,
and besides that, Hiei’s choose of Keiko’s new protector!
Now that this was out, Hiei would do what he
found it was the best for Keiko. Right as Hiei did it for Yukina too all the
time and in the short demons opinion, Yusuke was not the best suitor for the
young woman, not that Hiei disliked Yusuke or something like this. No, he
reacted only as his kind did it to people they considered as family or someone
under their charge.
Hiei found that the detective was too young to
give Keiko what she needed and so he thought about a better suitor for her.
He only would have to talk a little with the
person he had in mind, tell him a few things his jagon found accidentally in
Keikos mind when he showed her a few things.
Hiei was sure that the person would take
advantage of these new facts very quickly!
The yokai smiled secretly in his mind, Yusukes
very own fault. Why must the detective leave such a female alone for so long
with no protection? It was a wonder to the silent one that nothing has happen
to Keiko in all the time!
“I wish that nobody other as me, or who I
choose freely without any treats or harm, can use this ring! My next wish is,
that no one could take this ring from death or alive!
Finally, I wish that
never again, someone with a bad intention can use this ring for his or her
benefits, or that someone can use it to cause trouble to the three realms! If
it will be a human, a yokai, or a spirit doesn’t matter.”
Keiko spoke finally out aloud.
She smiled after she had done so; it gave Keiko
a good feeling to do this. Hiei was right, she really wanted not to have to see
and outlive the consequences, if the wrong person got this ring into his or her
fingers!
Hiei nodded, this would do it for now.
However, right now, he had a silver kit to
watch!
With that thought in mind, the yokai departed
after a short nod to the girl, right through the same window he came originally
into Keiko’s room.
After Hiei’s depart, Keiko thought about any
single wish she has made into the last hours.
She searched for a way to remove the maddest affects
on the people she loved, without to cause more trouble.
Nevertheless, Keiko found it would be better to
leave it be for the moment. She would deal later with the consequents, it was
better not to wake sleeping dragons!
“I only wished Hiei san would find his
happiness.” It came finally out of her in a low whispered tune after a while;
“and that I would be loved. It is so lonely here sometimes, and Yusuke is never
here for me.
I am so sorry Kurama Kun; I have caused you and
Yoko san so much trouble!”
She was about to turn around to do her homework
when she heard for the second time of this particular day, a voice suddenly answer
to her from the window again.
“I am glad to hear that, Keiko chan! Honestly,
Keiko, must it have been so much of it? Please, do not worry: I am not angry with you.
It must have been some kind of an accident
surely. So could you please tell me what has happen here?”
Keiko blushed furiously, why must every yokai
she knew, use her window to appear out of the nowhere!
That was not fair!
It was more important for the startled girl now
how she could explain the human counterpart of Yoko Kurama why the hell she
wished all the wishes she had wished!
Outside her window sat Hiei on the rooftop of
her neighbourhood house and smirked.
Keiko was in deep trouble this time! He was sure the nice girl would learn his
little lecture quit well, and it all would turn out nicely for the human female.
The human/ Kitzune, what ever the red head was now,
would treat her right and maybe, (who knows?) his little other plan would work
out faster as he thought!
Yusuke was too careless sometimes, and if it were
right what Hiei heard shortly in the Makai before he came back, someone other
would love it to have the young for itself. The person was angry about the fact
that Yusuke has someone here in the ningenkei.
Hiei would not let harm draw closer to Keiko in
any way!
Hiei found it was better for all of them.
With that, the little yokai returned to his
momentary favourite’s soap opera and watched silently the squirming star into
it with unmasked amusement, trying to find a way out of his self-made misery.
Actors?
Yoko Kurama!
And, Koenma junior!
`Keiko really has interesting ideas to teach
Yoko a little lesson! `
Please, forget not to leave a review. I need
them to survive!
Suryallee
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