Rose, Fire, and Dragon

A Rose In Love
By: Hiei Fox Lover
Chapter: 4

~~Hiei's POV~~

"Uremeshi, what's taking so long?" Great. Perfect timing idiot. I will not allow him

to ruin this.

"Go away!"

"Shut up, shrimp, before I break down this door and come in there." I'd like to see

him try. A weakling such as himself couldn't possibly-

"Ahh." My thoughts were momentarily abandoned when I felt Kurama roughly grab

my arousal. I let out another moan when Kurama began to massage it through an

obstacle known as clothing. I had already discarded my cape when we first came in

and I wore no shirt beneath it.

"Is everything okay in there?" If he doesn't go away soon I will make sure he dies a

very slow and painful death. "Everything is fine. Yusuke will be sharing our room."

Kurama spoke up. "There's only one- you guys are... Nevermind. I just wanted to tell

you I was going out with those two girls from the plane.

"Ahh." I was again caught by surprise when Kurama some how snaked his hands

in to my pants squeezing my aching member. I allowed him to take my pants of

tossing them to and unknown location. I then ripped his off. "Hiei, I liked those pants."

Did he really think I cared? They were in the way. "Hn."


Kurama's POV

Poor, Yusuke. If we continue on like this he'll release with or without our help. He's

so enticing like that. " I let go of Hiei's member and crawled over to him. I heard Hiei

whimper at the loss. Yusuke's eyes were closed and his cheeks flushed. I went to work

on the things blocking me from his member. Once he was completely naked I noticed

his eyes were still closed and lips slightly parted. I had to fix that. I wanted to see his

face in pleasure. I took advantage of his open mouth and kissed him. His eyes opened

only to close again when he got into the kiss.

I broke away and began kissing lower. I bit down hard on his neck an then licked it

in apology. I continued donward licking and kissing every piece of skin along the way.

When I reached his nipple I slowly drew circles around it with my tongue. Licking the

nub every once in awhile causing him to arch. "Kurama, please"

I went lower and dipped my tounge into his naval before I positioning my self between

his legs. I had to lick my lips at the hard organ in front of me. I wasted no time in deep

throating him. I inwardly smirked when his eyes shot open. "Ahh. Kur-rama!" I slowly

licked the underside of his painful arousal after taking it completely out my mouth. "Quit

teasing...Ahh. His sentence was cut short when I again deep throated him.

I felt the bed shift and Hiei reaching for something. I continued to suck on Yusuke's

member letting my teeth graze the skin now and then. "Ahh." A strange sensation

went through my spine when Hiei pressed a slicked finger against my entrance. I lifted

up a little when he stuck it in. I continued to suck on Yusuke to take my mind off the

pain of the second and third finger being pushed in. Suddenly all since left my body. All

I saw was white stars when Hiei touched something deep inside of me. I thrust back

onto his fingers wanting to feel it again. I released Yusuke from my mouth when I felt the

fingers disappear. I bit down on my lip when I felt Hiei thrust into me with no warning. I

began to suck on Yusuke again to block out the pain. After the pain dulled I pulled off

his organ a little only to slam back against it. Hiei taking the hint began to thrust into

me. After the first two thrust he hit that spot inside me again. "Harder! Harder!" I moaned

onto Yusuke's organ making him arch his back. I did it again and again liking the affect

it had on him. "Kurama!"

It felt wonderful. I had one lover fucking my mouth and the other, the rest of me. I

continued thrusting back against Hiei wanting to feel the wonderful pleasure over and

over again. "Oh Kurama. You're so tight." I was nearing my release and I could tell Hiei

and Yusuke were too. I sucked harder on Yusuke's shaft while fondling his balls. Hiei's

thrust became more faster and harder. Hiei grabbed my neglected member and stroked

it in time with his thrust. I released onto his hand. My muscles tightened around Hiei's

shaft causing him to spill his seed inside of me. Yusuke's essence found its way

in my mouth with his release. I took in every drop, sucking on his tip to make sure.

I collapsed on top of Yusuke. Hiei slid out of me and laid down beside us. I untied

Yusuke with what little strength I had. We entangled are limbs with each other and let

sleep overtake us as our minds race with many thoughts.


I know some grammer and punctuation is bad. Language Arts has always been my down side. I think I will take someone up on their advice about having it about Yusuke. I am obviously not good on lemons. I tried to do better. I also got Kuwabara out of there. Who would put him in a lemon with Hiei, Kurama, and Yusuke anyway? Yuck. Thank you for you comments and compliments.

(a/n I hope I did well. Please review. Advice is appreciated. Thank you to all who reviewed.)