What if... | By : Suryallee7104 Category: Yuyu Hakusho > Het - Male/Female Views: 7734 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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What if_
Type: Continuation,
Romance, Adventure, Action, Hentai,
Beta: Amanda san
Pairings: Hiei/ Keiko
Disclaimer: I do not own any
of the characters or the story of Yu Yu Hakusho itself. I only wrote down my
imagination, that’s all!
Warnings: Hentai, Adult situations,
Out written sexual acts, Oral, Penetration, Blood, M/F, Waff, Fluff, some plot
bunny jumping around, I don’t know!
Rated: NY17, Not for
children!
Description:
What if the meeting between Hiei and Keiko had gone another way as it
did into the series?
What would have happened then? Well, this is my version of it.
Important Note: This fiction has been beta for me from Amanda san;
please let her know how you found her work for me. I think she did a wonderful
job with it and deserves for her work an award!
Read and enjoy, Suryallee.
Chapter four
Thanks for the nice reviews!
To midnight rose, I would love to do you a favor, but I want the
characters as much in their normal way of acting as I can. I think Hiei would
never do this to Yusuke, he has too much secret respect for the ningen boy by
now, and it is out of his entire behavior
in the series, he would ask for help when he do not understand
something, but would never hit Yusuke without a point. I personally think it would make a difference
if she where his mate by now. However,
Keiko is not so he would only make a comment, maybe but even that is to
question because he does not like it when someone knows too much of his inner
self. He even refused to tell Kurama into the series why he did not tell Yukina
that he is her brother. I like to try to
hold the characters as much as I can in their normal behavior and that is
harder than you would believe! I hope in
this story I made him not too much act OCC; please tell me if I did so or not! But don't worry Yusuke will find out later.
Suryallee
Confusion is not only a ningens curse!
Kuso!
That was the only thought at the moment Hiei was capable to think.
What was that?!?
He was not sure what exactly happened to him inside of her room, or to
be more precise, why the hell he fell asleep inside. But he knew that it was
seemingly a permanent thing, to decide from his uncharacteristic behavior these
last weeks! Why was a miracle to him! The overwhelming smell of her inside of
it, the sudden feeling of peace when he was to near to her and simply the
presence of her real body and mind, put together and mixed with his loneliness
and his secret wanting to hold her near to himself, and you got a deadly poison
for a certain half fire half ice demon called Hiei out of it!
One, Hiei would gladly swallow and infect himself with, she only would
have to ask him and he would do it without a second thought.
He panted heavily, this silly human girl had an effect on him as no one
ever had before and the worst of it was that Hiei loved every single minute of
it!
No, not love, he corrected himself in his own trail of thoughts with a
small grin, it was more like an instinctual need much like his need to breathe.
He needed her like his air, the demon chuckled darkly to himself, when
had it changed to be more than only a game?
Every time since Koenma let him loose again and sent him to help the
youth and his comical tall friend, Hiei had used every second he could to sneak
away to see her. He watched her doing stupid normal ningen things like cleaning
her room for example or going to school. What mostly happened when she dragged
a certain detective with her there was a very amusing and satisfying sight Hiei
decided. It was priceless to see Yusuke’s struggles with her.
He had also seen her when she slept.
Every night he could manage it Hiei canceled Koenma’s spies out with his
jagan and was seconds later to be found on her neighborhood house roof watching
her to go to bed or simply, sleep. The demi god had put him under Kurama’s
watch first, but after some time Koenma let him go around freely into the
borders of the town, his only advice for Hiei was that he had to stay inside of
the radius of the town and the surrounding Forrest. He was, in other words,
trapped inside the town's border for now. Hiei did not like it at all, but then
again, he could do what he pleased as long as it didn’t involve any ningen’s
safely or lives. And so, he did!
Hiei knew Kurama suspected something; after all he was a Kitsune at
heart.
They were highly sensual and curious beings; it was no wonder that he suspected
something. But Hiei would be dammed before he would let the Fox spy into his
businesses or let him know!
So Hiei was more then careful when he went to *see* after her, mostly
the demon used his jagan for it, as he did when he searched after his sister.
And he made sure every time that he wasn't followed by the Kitsune, and
*this* one especially was a curious pest!
Kurama even tried to trick him a time or two to tell him where he went
when Hiei got away from him again!!! Kitsunes! He chuckled, Kurama’s face when
Hiei got away again was priceless to watch. But he also knew that the fox would
not stop to being a pest and that Hiei would have to tell him some day.
But until then, who said that Hiei could not get a little fun out of
this?
After he found out that the spirit world had erased her memory, Hiei was
angrier than ever before. But to his relief the Reikei could not erase
everything as they normally did to humans who were involved in demon business,
Yusuke had not allowed it. He owed the boy something for that.
Koenma had cleared everything out of her mind that had to do with the
fish hall, but he could not erase her other memories and so Keiko remembered
him to be in her room instead of forgetting it as she should have done. It was
amusing to watch her trying to get some information out of the poor boy or the
others, but also it was frustrating.
Hiei had never believed she would come to his tree and that she would
ask him! He could see the red head standing inside the door and watching her
doing so, Hiei decided to hold up his facade and to fool the fox with one of
his famous Hn`s.
To fool a Kitsune was hard enough, but to fool a thousand plus years old
fox was even harder. So Hiei did the only thing that he certainly knew that
would distract the Kitsune entirely; he teased Keiko. There was nothing better
to distract a male being or a fox, than a fuming female!
The short demon watched with delight as every single male in the temple cringed
away from her as fast as possible after he did just that. He could easily hear
them cursing after him for getting away with it and bring her temper on their
heads! Hiei simply laughed so hard that his stomach hurt from it finally after
he had gotten away from them enough. Even Koenma didn’t want to be in one room with
her when Keiko got that angry.
It was priceless!
Hiei had more fun here in the ningenkei than he ever had before in the
Makai. Now he had not only the carrot
top to tease, whom he secretly liked, Hiei had also found the soft spot of the
detective. And Hiei was determined to
use it as often as he could, he would have his revenge on the boy; one way or
the other! Later, after a lecture in
behavior, from a certain fox-spirit who tried his hardest not to laugh with him
when he gave Hiei the very same one, Hiei sneaked away from Kurama’s grasps
again.
When the youkai appeared by her household, Keiko had just gotten inside
her bathtub. Curious how far he could go and get away with it and how she
looked when she was vulnerable, Hiei simply appeared right inside the bathroom
and scarred the shit out of the young ningen.
But Hiei had not expected the sudden effect her body would have on him.
Sure, most of it was under water and covered from the bubbles of the soap, but
the rest she showed him unknowingly when she raised her head to look at who
dared to enter her private time, was nearly more than the short youkai had
bargained for!
Creamy skin and long slender legs from what Hiei was able to see, a
light sheen made her skin paler looking to him than normal and her big brown
eyes captured the short demon entirely.
Not to mention the easy to see outlines of her breasts in the water, he
could even see the darker colored nipples of them right under the waterline.
Maybe Keiko was a mere child now but in a short time she would grow into
an alluring masterpiece of a woman that could take a male's breath away with
ease. Even now being nothing more, than
a woman child, she was drawing him to her. Suddenly Hiei wanted nothing other
than to occupy the tub with her at the moment!
How old was this ningen now anyway, thirteen, fourteen? Only a few more
years and every male in the entire three worlds would go after her to catch
her! How he could have thought of her as
dull and simple was now a mystery to Hiei.
But then again, had he really looked at her?
After this alluring and enchanting sight Hiei knew he would never be able
to let anyone else have her. The boy could have the bubbly ferry spirit guide
for all Hiei cared, but this female was going to be in his possession!
He just barely restrained himself from doing what he wanted to so badly.
Hiei groaned deeply inside his mind without a single trace to see on his
face, she was really alluring!
Instead Hiei gave the shocked girl only a dirty smirk to cover his
excitedreaction the view gave him, and to fool her away from any reveling
thoughts.
The payback came promptly!
Before the enchanted youkai knew what had hit him, he was soaked from a
very loudly screaming and cursing female ningen with water out of her tub.
Unknowingly to Keiko, Hiei got just a better look of her body by this
but luckily for her Hiei was not able to enjoy the sudden sight, because he was
too busy avoiding another shot of water from her; not to mention that he just barely
avoided to fall victim to one of her deadly slaps!
He did the only sane thing a male could do in this insane moment, Hiei
fled for the first time of his life from a ningen, out of the bathroom.
A flying soap that was following unknowingly to Hiei, his path out, hit
him in the head right before he could get the blasted door open. He saw stars
for some seconds, and before he knew what happened to him she got him by his
collar and dragged him with her to her room.
Hiei's sensitive ears hurt like hell from all the screaming and his head
felt like someone had hit him hard.
Inside this blasted room-called bathroom it sounded even louder than
normal when someone screamed! He took the towel from her mother, only to look
at it and dried himself with a sudden boost of his true natured self. It took
the demon only seconds to be dry again after he raised his youki.
Nice voice, he commented dryly inside his mind, she could wake the dead
with it that was certain! His ears where still ringing from it.
When Keiko left her room for some minutes, Hiei marveled at her scent
that lingered inside of it. It calmed
him down in seconds. He never had acted this careless before! But then again, only she knew now and her
parents but they Hiei could easily get under his control if he wished it.
His senses lost track for a short while, only her scent was important.
He let the pictures from what he just saw, repeat in the front of his
inner eyes again. She really was lovely.
Hiei was confused with his own reactions, why did he act like he did it
all the time when she was near? Against his better judgment Hiei did not hate
the entire human race, he just disliked them. They were mostly powerless fools,
not worth his time or even a stray thought from him.
Most of them seemed not to know the word hygiene; he gave the Detective
the credit that he seemed to know it.
Keiko seemed to take a bath every night before she went to bed. He had
noted, she never smelled of something other than clean skin. He liked the scent
of her more than the soap she used. But
his train of thoughts took Hiei back to the troubles he had just before. And so
the youkai swallowed heavily and willed the seductive pictures out of his inner
eyesight.
It was this very moment Keiko chose to come back again. And so she got a
look that left her curious about his behavior. Hiei quickly got his features
back under his will and fooled her once more; somehow he got the feeling that
it didn’t work as it should have this time.
When the girl finally began to think more closely over his words, Hiei
felt suddenly very tired. The youkai had just come back from the rescue of his
sister and gone through hell and back inside of his own soul on that. His defenses were worn out and his soul
needed rest. He was happy at the moment that he had just found his precious
sister, even if she did not know that he was her brother. Hiei was contented to let it be this way; he
found it would be the best for Yukina not to know. He was a criminal after all.
Keiko’s scent, and the suddenly strong feeling of peace and his worn out
self finally won over his normally iron will. Hiei fell asleep in a few
moments.
He woke up from a very disturbing noise hours later. Feeling refreshed
as Hiei had never felt before. Only cursing on the strange sound that woke him
from very pleasant dreams!
To his utter horror the demon found out only seconds later that it was
himself who made the crazy sound!!! He
abruptly stopped the cursed purring and tried to find out how that could have
happened. Hiei was only glad that no one could see his berry red face at this
moment! Frantically the youkai thought about his behavior to make sense out of
it.
His kind would do that only when… then it hit Hiei hard.
Every youkai species had their own unique way of seducing a chosen
partner. This purring sound was one of the few things most of them had in
common when it came to this. Somehow Keiko's mere presence had brought it out
unknowingly from him and his body had started to seduce her into his presence,
without even knowing it!
But why?
Why did his demonic side seemingly find this female ningen worthy enough
to be his mate? She was all in all only a ningen! And a mere child by that, not
even a right age for something like this.
His thoughts ran amuck inside of his mind. Hiei could not figure out why
this all was happening to him!
Why?
She even was engaged of some sort to another. She was not even his! The
demon knew that he was traipsing into unfamiliar areas and didn’t like this a
bit. His angry stare went to her sleeping form, there it hit him again
when he finally took in what his eyes told him; she slept!
In his presence!
Keiko was asleep!
Maybe she did not know anything about youkai, but for Hiei it told the
him allot about her, that the female slept peacefully in his dangerous
presence.
The temperamental female trusted him enough that she had fallen asleep,
with him in her room.
With him!
He could easily have killed her in this vulnerable state, but she
trusted him, unknowingly, that much. Hiei was flabbergasted for a minute after
this discovery.
Simply frozen to the spot.
After he came back to his senses, Hiei asked himself idly if the girl
knew what that meant to a demon such as himself. Relaxing slightly the demon
waited patiently for something else that would prove his suspicions more then
anything else.
He was awake now for how long?
Ten minutes?
Maybe twelve but not longer than fifteen, Hiei was sure.
He could hear her table alarm clock ticking.
Every second that passed by made him anxious and mad to know if she
would react like Hiei thought she would.
Then suddenly it happened as he had hoped it would happen. His breath
came out in a harsh rush, but Hiei had not been aware that he had held it.
Keiko awoke.
Simple as that, she woke up and seemed to search after something.
Only Hiei knew what she was searching for, his purring. And that was
what he had waited for. Keiko did not know what she just did but he knew and
that gave the demon the confidence to look at her with a predatory look
and to vanish out of her room. Before he did something he would regret
later.
Outside the short demon quietly beamed with joy, she had unconsciously
accepted him to court her!
Whether she knew it or not, if Keiko preferred the boy for now or not;
she gave him her agreement in every youkai law the short demon knew, and that
was all that mattered to Hiei.
With a silent sigh he settled down on one single branch on the tree
outside her neighbor's house and started to sort out again why his primitive
self seemed to want her this badly!
Hiei wasn't used to situations like this!
After some deeper thinking he decided that he needed serious help in
this
from someone who could know, maybe. His normally aloof and closed
attitude forgotten for the moment he gave in and flitted away, after a short
and longing look, to talk with someone who could help him sort out what was
happening to him.
Genkai was to put it into words, more than surprised to see Hiei
suddenly
standing inside her bedroom! But the look the demon wore at the moment
silenced the old spirit instantly.
‘What the hell can make that
demon so confused that he comes to me of all
people in the middle of the
night?!’
Aloud it came out as only; "Well Hiei, long time no see. What
brings you to my bedside at this hour?"
She smiled secretly at his sour face after she addressed him and shook
her head unbelievingly only seconds later when he told her what he wanted.
Never had Genkai ever believed someone had told her that the dangerous
youkai would ask her some day *this* question!
"I need your help!"
Suryallee
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