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Shattered soul
Well, this is one
of my darker fics. When I first wrote it down I was in a bad mood but it turned
out better as I thought it would.
Some into it will
confuse you first to no end, but it will make sense later and is important for
the rest of the story.
I hope you will
like this one and tell me what you think.
Sorry for my bad
English,
Suryallee
Thanks for the
nice reviews!
Chapter 6; Truths
from the past
What will you thing when you see the
past again through someone others eyes,
Will you look more closely?
What will you do, when you find out
that some of us have secrets you never thought they would have,
Will you believe them?
What will you do after you found
out what lays behind someone others soul?
Accept it or fear about your own
live?
She whirled around with a brush into her hands.
After they had found this old temple into the
middle of the place, they had begun to clean it.
Both of them thought it was only fair to do so
since the souls here protected them from there enemies.
Keiko had found some peace her the last days,
this place calmed her nerves and make it easy with it quite to forget the
harshness of life she and Hinagiku went through the last two years.
She did not know how old this place was, but to
decide it of from the dust that lays everywhere it must be very old.
Surprisingly the time had been careful to this
old temple.
Their where no single harm to all the statues
into his middle room, nor to the building itself.
Only dust and that came in tons of it!
The entire place screamed of old power to the
women. It was sure that this kindness of time where not normal.
What surprised Keiko the most was a single
statue into the end of the room.
It holds a staff long as a standing human and
was entirely made out of some strange burned black wood from an unknown tree.
It could not be a normal staff she decided, a
normal one had turned to dust by now.
This one shows no single harm.
Keiko was very careful by cleaning it from the
dust.
What wondered her also was the big hole into
middle of the room.
It was filled with clear water what had a deep
black colour from the deepness of the hole.
Keiko did not want to think about it, it scared
her somehow. Inside her mind seem to open a door if she looked into its depths.
It was like it draws her into it.
She sights out, this entire place screamed of
old power, what ever had happened here it leaved a deep sadness that clouded
this place like a blanked.
Suddenly something strange happened around Keiko
when she turned around again to get herself more water to clean the statue in
front of her.
The entire place seemed enlighten with candles.
And instead of day it was suddenly deep in the night! Through the front portal came
some women with long robes out of a material she never saw before and into the
middle of them was one single woman into blood red clothes who seemed to
scream; back of! Don’t touch me!
She was on the hand of one of the others and
kneeled down in front of the pound.
Her hair was deep black. Like a ravens wing it
throws away the lights of the candles in myriads of colours.
She was beautiful.
Keiko gasped suddenly, that got her the full
attention of the woman in front of the pound.
She looked up right into Keikos face without to
see her.
`She is blind! `
Run through Keikos head when she saw into the
endless somehow glassy eyes of the beautiful woman across from her.
She must be she concluded there was no other
way, but why could she be aware of her presence the young woman thought
absently.
Then the black haired one waved to her to come
near and motioned to the complete surprise of the women around them both who
could seemingly not see keiko to sit down in front of her of the other site of
the strange pool.
She waved her hand through the water beneath
her feet and after it cleared again keiko could suddenly see something;
The first scene was herself with her parents
the last day before they died. Sitting all together onto their old kitchen
table and laugh about one of her father’s jokes.
Keiko had tears into her eyes when she saw it,
The next, showed her Yukina who tried to make
her stay at Genkais, right the night before she vanished.
The next, showed her Kurama, he was sitting
into his chair and was working onto his homework, when suddenly he lost his
pencil out of his fingers and gripped his head with a utter cry of pain.
Everything turned into some sort of white mist around him and after the fog has
cleared, she could saw Yoko and him lying separated onto the floor.
Now Keiko was curios,
The next, showed Keiko something strange, it
was Hiei with her into his arms right at the same cut into the street she had
fainted, looking sadly and longingly down onto her features.
Keiko was confused,
The next, showed a Yusuke into his full majin
form who broke the barrier between the realms after he had killed some warriors
from the Reikei.
The next, showed the now startled woman an
entirely other scene as before.
She found her gaze back into a battlefield.
Around her she could see a fight raging on, a nasty war that was fought out by
warriors into armours she never saw before into her whole live.
On the sidelines Keiko could make out two
parties of people who watched the war with interest.
One of the men who stand into the middle of
them had fiery red hair what went down to his waist and hold his arms folded in
front of him. Everything onto this completely in red cloted man cried, danger!
He had strange fiery eyes and looked pissed!
The other one was clothed entirely in black, no
not black more, such a deep red that it seemed to be black, Keiko found.
His hair had the same colour and was also very
long for a man; it ended right under his waist line.
Both where having a very bad day it seems to
Keiko, but this guy looked not so recognizable pissed as the other one.
More into a colder way, it was more to see into
his black eyes as into his posture.
Something onto him was familiar to Keiko but
she could not put her finger onto it.
Suddenly a figure behind the black one got her
attention; it was the same woman from the temple.
She was standing behind the black one with the
same staff into her hands Keiko had seen before hold by the statue. She seemed
sad and torn to the woman. Keiko suddenly felt pity for her.
The she heard a loud cry behind her and went
her gaze back to the red man. But all Keiko could see was his shadow that
seemed to grow larger at every minute and twisted slowly into the frame of a
beast!
`A dragon!!!`
Keiko thought when she finally recognised the
shape and tried to change her focus back to the owner of the shadow.
What she saw took Keikos breath away.
It was a starting dragon in all its glory. A
red golden one to be exact that spied death out of its mouth to the people
below him. It was huge! Bigger as Hiei´s into the dark tournament and only
awful!
Suddenly a big shadow quit out the sun from her
frame, it was another dragon that rose against the sky from behind her much
more quietly as the first one and was entirely black!
It was also beautiful to watch and huge as the
other one.
Both of the monsters meet right into the middle
of the battlefield and began their own fight.
All the people who were alive by now or into
the lucky place to could move began hastily to retreat from here. Only the
strange woman and Keiko reminded and watched one with not seeing eyes and one
with big eyes the like a dance like fight between the beasts above them.
After a wile the black one gained the upper
hand and bit down into the long neck of the red one.
Both felt down to the earth below them and make
a deep hole into the ground.
The red dragon was death before it hit the
ground but the black one died right after the crash.
What happened after was shocking Keiko, both
beasts seemed to vanish into some mist and drifted into the Skye.
The next scene showed Keiko a place into a
black space where she could see hardly the black dragon liking his wounds and
burning into black flames.
Suddenly it hit the young woman hard why she had
thought the black one was somehow familiar to her;
It was Hiei´s dragon of darkness flame! But she
thought ever it was created with the Makai?!
How old was this beast really??
The next scene showed Keiko; the same dragon
turning into mist again and vanish out of the dark place.
Suddenly she stands into a field under a red
sky right onto a river.
Their was a arm in view that hold his hand into
a tight fist.
Keiko could see the strange mist seep into the
pale skin of it. After this done the person she shared somehow the eyes with
went to the river and kneeled in front of it to wash its face.
Keiko could see Hiei´s face for some seconds,
it looked much younger as the last time she saw the yokai.
Then everything went black.
The last thing the woman heard before she
fainted was;
“Don’t let it happen again!”
I wished I had a better grip on the English; it
turned not exactly out how I wanted it to be!
I hope everyone can follow my story.
Suryallee
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