Humidity | By : thothmoon Category: Yuyu Hakusho > Yaoi - Male/Male > Hiei/Kurama Views: 2382 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A/N: This story is so near completion! I am envisioning two more chapters following this one, a fuller chapter entitled “Snow Eater” and a shorter epilogue-style chapter called “Fair Weather,” and then this portion of the “Black Roses” storyline will be completed.
In the meantime, this chapter has, with the exception of a few little details, e.g. the scientific name of the plant Kurama sails, been completed since the date indicated below, a full month ago. I thank everyone so much for their patience and for continuing to read this story, which is so near full completion now. I shall be working to bring out the last installations of this story shortly; until then, read and enjoy! Humidity***
The noon hour found the overgrown Nymphaeaceae once more floating two figures down the floodway. Its original captain resumed encouraging its course, this time more actively, because sometimes going back is harder to do than was the initial meander that took one out with it. For all that though, Kurama gazed stoically over the drowned road, and soon they would reach a point where each could rest on their own two feet again.
Hiei of course could have inconspicuously returned to the city much faster on his own, as Kurama had pointed out, saying he wouldn’t take offense. But Hiei had declined; or rather, he had wordlessly boarded the amphibious leaf, and sat cross-legged, leaning back into several of the sail’s petals and contemplating the vein-work of the deck as they drifted along, saying nothing for a while. The look on Kuwabara’s face when Yukina named her brother had been the cream of that goof’s comical faces by far, and Yusuke would sorely regret missing it when he returned; it was one that the aforementioned brother would certainly relish in memory for some time to come. Of course after a prolonged recovery period, that look gave way to one of suspicion and admonition: If Hiei was the long not-so-lost brother, why hadn’t he said anything before, especially with Yukina searching right there in front of him? In a bored voice Hiei had given his reasons, already refuted by Kurama scores times over, and finally refuted forever by the girl ever at question. From Kuwabara though he received no refutation, which he had taken for granted and which was just as well—he didn’t need too many people in one setting trying to drill into him what a good person he was, and counted on Kuwabara at least to side with him. —But then that idiot had gone and betrayed him as well, standing there gawking at him in genuine amazement, and finally getting out, “I thought you didn’t care what people thought of you?” Hiei stiffened, then rolled his eyes, cocked his head, shrugged one shoulder, and retorted, “I don’t care about people.” Which of course condemned him further, because Kuwabara then looked curiously from Kurama to Yukina, and with a knowing look back to Hiei, who at that moment might have melted Kuwabara’s face if given half the chance and no repercussion, it was so smug. “Yeah Hiei,” the psychic humored. “You keep mouthing those words for all those tough demons in Makai to hear; I’ll keep an eye on you in Human World when they’re all not looking, okay?” And now Hiei sat brooding over his spot of leaf, thinking which chewed worse on his ego: the self-portrait of him as the criminal unworthy of being loved, or the sentimentalist ripe for jest. Suddenly: “I love you,” Kurama murmured. Hiei glanced up, over. Kurama was still looking ahead, but something other than the sun warmed his contemplative face. “I don’t know when I started to, but I love you. I love your loyalty, your intuition that things are amiss, and your wisdom to contain your solicitations for when they are especially necessary.” His lips tugged upward. “I love your attempts to shroud your vulnerabilities, and your substance that lets it fall loose now and then. Also—” Here now he looked Hiei full in the face, the smile full on his own. “I love that I can say I love you, for being the one person to genuinely make me sick.” Hiei stared at him from under deadpan brows, which crinkled as his face loosened into something too suppressed for a full-on smile, but warmer than a smirk. “Hn,” he said, and looked at the “floor.” “But Hiei,” Kurama continued. Hiei looked up again, in time to see a fair set of knuckles come sailing his way, just above eye level. Above level with his pair of eyes, at least. He wheezed in shock, and dumbstruck stared vacantly first ahead then up as he fell over the edge of the leaf with a matter-of-fact splash. The world wavered and turned murky as he floated below the surface a moment, cloak billowing around him. And then he blinked, kicked his feet indignantly, broke the surface sputtering, and turned his head toward the leaf, stared in bewildered expectation at Kurama. Who stared back self-assured, and jovially called out, “Yoko Kurama is a silver Fox, Hiei, not white.” Hiei spat water out his mouth, which then contorted into a grimace, but he dared not say anything in retort, and only muttered, “I deserve it,” as he swam back to the leaf. “It’s not entirely unjust,” Kurama conceded, extending one hand toward the water. Hiei took it, and didn’t mind that he sloshed water on the leaf and its captain as he was pulled back aboard. “I wasn’t right in the head,” he said apologetically, dismissively, and shrugged out of his sodden cloak. It made a squishy sound as it pooled around his feet, and he stepped to one side of it, then knelt, leaning back on his heels, hoping to expose himself as much as possible, that he might dry at least a little in the sun. He caught Kurama looking at him—and nonchalantly looking away—, and smirked. “Enjoy it while you can,” he goaded the Fox, pushing one giant lily petal back in invitation. “My sister’s wedding is coming up, and I’ve been in the Human World too long.” “Oh?” Kurama gave him a curious look. “Back to Alaric?” The Jaganshi rolled his eyes at the intentionally, barely concealed tone of Kurama’s voice. “No,” he replied. “Mukuro put me on leave, so to speak, until I reconciled a few personal issues. And somehow she’ll know if I return with that task only halfway met, not just pertaining to you.” Kurama angled his head in bemusement. “And I’m not skipping out on the wedding,” Hiei continued, “since you were wondering.” Kurama confirmed this with an unapologetically guilty smile. “I actually very much intend on being present, which is also why I intend on leaving sooner rather than later. It’s my deadline.” “Deadline?” Kurama repeated, tone conveying that he half-comprehended what Hiei was talking about, and was fishing for the other half. “I told her I would,” Hiei strung him along. Kurama gave him a mock-exasperated look, and Hiei smirked as he kicked his cloak in the redhead’s general direction. “You may talk big,” he jeered. “But a picture’s worth a thousand words, isn’t that what your humans say?” “Yes, and what picture do you refer to?” asked Kurama as he picked a wet, hollow black sleeve off the tongue of his shoe, and joined Hiei beneath the petals. Hiei smirked superiorly. “The one under here,” he said, pointing to his headband. “I found my way back to that isle once; it should be even simpler the second time.” Simpler than he would appear on arrival at least, especially with the company that insisted on going with him. ------------
A/N: I’m curious to know, if anyone would so opine, the effect on the chapter inferred by my decision to omit the actual revelatory scenes pertaining to Hiei’s actual relation to Yukina. Or in the case of him telling her, I guess I should say the elaboration scene, since the past chapter closed with his actual telling her. I almost included a flashback in this chapter following up on that scene, but I felt that drawing it out would be just that—drawing it out, with about as much accomplished after as beating over a dead horse. I mean, last chapter wound up to me having this almost baroque feel the way I wound up writing some of the scenes, particularly the last one, and I liked the effect but I felt if I carried it over to this chapter is would become too gratuitously graphic. Was I wise to summarize rather than give a detail-by-detail account? Thoughts?
Anyway, the next chapter I anticipate shall be called “Snow Eater,” returning to the overall weather motif of this story; and as that and the parting lines of this chapter might indicate, our children of scandal are taking a brief trip home. Hopefully the coincidence of the icy weather coming up and the current winter weather around Yours Truly will further motivate me to bring that to you all the sooner. In the meantime, I wish you all a happy holiday, whichever ones you and yours celebrate; thanks for reading! – 12/23/11
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