What if... | By : Suryallee7104 Category: Yuyu Hakusho > Het - Male/Female Views: 7734 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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What if_
Type: Continuation, Romance, Adventure, Action, Hentai,
Beta: Amanda san
Pairings: Hiei/ Keiko
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters or the story of Yu
Yu Hakusho itself. I only wrote down my imagination, that’s all!
Warnings: Hentai, Adult situations, Out written sexual acts,
Oral, Penetration, Blood, M/F, Waff, Fluff, some plot bunny jumping around, I
don’t know!
Rated: NY17, Not for children!
Description:
What if the meeting between Hiei and Keiko had gone another way as it
did into the series?
What would have happened then? Well, this is my version of it.
Important Note: This fiction has been beta for me from Amanda san;
please let her know how you found her work for me. I think she did a wonderful
job with it and deserves for her work an award!
Read and enjoy, Suryallee.
Chapter seven
Came not online today and most of the last night, they are working here
on a problem currently, and that was why this chappy wasn't to see yesterday,
sorry!
Have fun with this one here,
Sury
Will you let me have this?
Hiei lay awake with the Yukimura girl in his arms for the next two
hours.
The short demon was having a hard time with himself and his suddenly
strong need for the girl. He had stopped there in the tree because the scent of
her growing virginal arousal had slowly driven the youkai insane with his
longing for the fiery tempered girl!
So he had stopped himself before he would have done something he
would regret later.
It wasn't planed!
Hiei had only wanted to teach the kind girl a lesson of how stupid and
dangerous it was for her to do something like that. She did not know that his
blood system now craved her blood and body! He could barely restrain his wants
from her and that had brought them both into this mess.
His emotions where ten times stronger than a humans and in their needs
youkai were unpredictable and hard to control!
Even from themselves.
His entire body, mind and soul had driven him to demonstrate her
stupidity and his superiority over the human girl. Her temper flared his inner
needs more, if that was even possible.
The youkai in him had wanted to get a hold of the girl; if his primitive
side could not eat or devour the human girl, then it wanted her to be a part of
himself!
The entire identity of his self had chosen to want the latter of the options
and had acted on it. She was smart enough to stay submissive most of the time;
Hiei did not want to know what could have happened to her if she hadn't!
Surely, his demonic side would have thrown her down on the shore and
taken what it wanted.
He was a youkai and not a human, but Hiei wanted her to understand this
and that she was playing quite literally, with fire!!
He was fire in the shape and form of a humanoid and not the dimwit of a
detective who couldn't make up his mind to ask her out. Hiei had made up his
mind entirely this minute; he was now truly after the human girl, and heaven or
hell, he would have her as his mate in the end!
The short demon had never found someone who accepted him simply as what
he was, or let him be himself. Keiko did that with ease all the time, even if
she did not know it now. It had driven
him mad when the boy showed up on her doorsteps and dared to ask her out for a
date! Inside the demon everything had screamed to light him on fire, but
knowing her, Hiei had only burned his dammed flowers and had nearly set his
trousers on fire.
The fire youkai did not like to share!
Her responses to his seduction and inviting of her into his presence and
his care had delighted the short demon greatly. His instincts had done that for
him, it was nothing more than a test, so to speak. An invitation from Hiei of
what she could have with him if she would take his silent offers and chose him
instead of the detective.
Only a simple way to make it clear to the teen that the demon wanted her
as his own and that he would not turn away from his wants before she had
clearly chosen one of them. Hiei would fight to have her as his own possession
with all he could.
Including seducing her, if that was needed to make her give in!
He had also wanted her to understand that he was a mature male and not
the immature boy who she foolishly wanted to be with! That Hiei could give her
much more than the boy could.
So very, much more.
And he wanted to do just that!
Since the hi-youkai had made up his mind, there was no turning back.
As long she didn't tell him otherwise, Hiei would be dammed to give her
up freely to Yusuke! Who was, in the
opinion of the demon, not strong enough to take care of the girl! And this meant
not only his brutal strength but Yusuke's lack of maturity in general. The
human youth could never satisfy a growing woman like Keiko as Hiei could with
his experience of many more years.
And the small youkai was determined to do just that!
A low growl escaped his thin lips from all the thoughts of what he would
do with her delicious body, when he would finally get her in his bed for real!
Sure, Keiko slept peacefully right beside him now, but his mind played
out an entirely other scene; involving her and him, naked between the sheets
and being more then only near to each other's body.
He let another low moan escape; Hiei could have a really good
imagination, if he wanted to!
To feel her soft curves pressed against his own battle hard physique in some
other ways as now, was something Hiei eagerly looked forward to and with
inhumanly glinting eyes. Since he had seen her in the bathtub, he had not
gotten all the alluring images out of his inner eyesight.
His wish from then on to occupy it with her has not vanished with time;
instead it had grown to near of an obsession to the short youkai.
It plagued his nights with enticing and alluring dreams of Keiko and
him, and his days with the pain from the nights before! More than once Hiei
awoke from one of these slowly seducing and alluring wet dreams with a certain
problem in his lower regions afterwards, and had to take refuge into a cold
lake to get it away!
The youkai only needed to close his almond-shaped eyes to see the her
body writhing in passion against his own, and he was more than willing and
ready to act on his dreams.
And right now, it wasn't a really good time to close his eyes!
Because if he did that, he would lose it surely and just lose himself
into her presence so near and real to his own!
His arousal would not go away damn it!
The restraining pants began to hurt him slowly and the friction of cloth
against his sensitive flesh was more the demon could bear at the moment!
Hiei cursed lowly under his breath he was about to lose it anyway.
Suddenly the sleeping teen moved her left leg up his own and rested it
just over his twitching arousal under his cloak and inside his pants.
Hiei's eyes tripled in size and he groaned deeply in his throat when he
felt the sweet friction of her moving leg and the weight of it finally settled against
his excited cock. The pressing weight of her leg against his arousal shot bolts
of pure pleasure through the body of the demon; he arched himself slightly into
the sweet friction in a weak attempt to get more of these feelings out of it.
The sleeping girl not knowing what she did to the youkai at the moment
moved her leg slightly, irritated in her sleep from his sudden movement, up and
down right on his arousal in the attempt to find a more relaxing position.
For several moments the youkai couldn't breathe properly, her softly
moving leg on his exited member under the thick layers of cloth was taking his
ability to breathe away. Before Hiei knew what he was doing, his bandaged arm
and had come down to her leg and gripped it carefully to stop the moving of it
on his member.
With gritted teeth, the demon fought with him self to stop from moving
his hips just with her leg to get his release.
A barely restrained deep throated growl escaped him, and he fought a
losing battle with his needs; his hand suddenly let loose of her and went
instead to the sizeable bulge in his pants under his long cloak.
A hiss of pleasure escaped the demon when he finally made contact with
it through the cloth. Hiei arched into his own caressing touch on it, if he
couldn't have her for real, then he would take whatever he could have for now!
In slow motions he slid his hand along the length of it up and down,
torturing slowly, careful not to wake his sleeping desire so near to him accidentally
with his movements. Every now and then escaping his gritted teeth a low moan or
groan. Meanwhile, he tortured himself forcefully and slowly through the cloth.
Hiei wanted nothing other than to loudly growl out his pleasure in this
moment. Nothing more as to free himself from the cloth that separated him from
the sweet feeling of bare skin!
And he wanted nothing other than to take her for real.
To feel her soft skin against his own overheated body and her hands and
mouth on his weeping cock!
A suddenly sitting up Keiko next to him stopped the demon dead in his
moves!
Shit! Keiko had woken up!
Keiko was dreaming the same dream she now had since the night she was
ill. But suddenly the mattress under her had begun to move! That woke the
confused teen up from her peaceful sleep.
At first she did not know what had woken her, but when her sleep fuzzed
mind finally took in what was happening right next to her Keiko blushed in deep
shades of red! When the startled girl dared to open her eyes she was greeted
with a sight that took her breath away. Hiei was moving his hand up and down in
slow motions along a certain part in his pants and his face was contorted in
the utter pleasure this act must bring him.
The soft guttural noises he gave while Hiei did this sent lightning
bolds of arousal through her body, and the sight of him writing in pleasure
aroused the girl even more!
For some seconds Keiko was simply frozen to the spot on his shoulder she
laid on. But then the girl suddenly
bolted up with a red face from her resting place only to be stopped by his
burning gaze that caught her’s in this second and held her captive.
Suddenly Hiei brought his hand up to her face and caressed her left
cheek slowly, as not to scare her presence away from him. Then the demon leaned
his face up and brushed his lips seductively and inviting over hers.
Keiko was too startled to tear herself away from him, unsure what to do
in this moment. Hiei slid his hand behind her head into her locks and took her
down with him slowly at first but then in a more and more passionate kiss with
him.
He could not stop himself from it, he had to feel her, taste her, and
hold her.
He wanted to assure Keiko that it was ok, that Hiei knew he wouldn't have
more than this right now. That she didn't need to be scared by his actions, and
that he needed her badly! Needed this, how strange it was to her, that it was
ok to go with one's needs when it came to that. Hiei's wanted her to stay with
him here, until he found his release.
"Stay, just stay here with me, Keiko. I swear I will not touch you
if you not want me to; I only want you to be near to me now. I need you so
badly, this so badly! Do you have the
slightest idea how badly I want you all the time?
Need you near to me? Need to hold
you and hear your voice all the time?
Believe me when I tell you that I only want you to be mine and mine
alone!
But since I cannot have you the way I want it and have been longing for
so long now, just let me have this!"
His tongue licked heatedly at the outer shell of her right ear while
Hiei huskily told her all this.
The urgency of his needs began to show themselves fully to the demon; he
could not stop himself now. He needed to free himself from this hurting arousal
and sweet painful longing for the human girl in his arms! Hiei felt her shudder
in his grip; her sweet musk of arousal filled his nostrils and left him
light-headed.
A whimper escaped the dangerous demon at this, if that was all he could
get from her, then he wanted all of what he could get out of it! His hand began
to fist itself into her short locks as his other went back to the sweet pain in
his baggy pants, to stroke it with more urgency than before.
"Let me just have this, Keiko. I need it so badly!" Hiei
breathed into her by now wet ear.
He could feel her slowly give in to this. It was easy to smell her
trepidation and fear about this all out of her scent. He wanted nothing more
than to assure her that it would be ok to let herself go. She was after all a
young ningen and had no experience in this. Suddenly the youkai feared she
would leave!
"Do you want me to… beg for it?
I never have begged to someone or for anything before in my life Keiko.
But if it is holding you here with me I will swallow my pride and do it!
But only to you, only for you I would do it for!"
The girl tensed at this in his grip, her eyes snapped open and a look of
utter terror showed out of it. Hastily she went down to the bewildered demon
and whispered in a dangerous voice heatedly in his face with an angry
expression;
"Don't you even dare to just think of something like this!?
I will never hear you saying anything like this again, Hiei!
That wouldn't be you and tha…!"
She was interrupted by Hiei's suddenly agile tongue in her mouth.
As said one ravished her caverns with enthusiasm, his arm around her frame
tightened to near pain. A deep throated groan escaped the demon she was half
laying on, to be swallowed from her.
His eyes were half lidded when he pulled back from the burning kiss.
"Understood."
Was all he told her with a huskily deep voice and a sultry expression on
his handsome face!
His gaze took the teen's breath away; it was a look of pure sex that he
showed her in this moment. It left the girl more aroused than before.
Suddenly Hiei pulled her down to him again and began to lick at the skin
of her neck and shoulder, just as he did it before in the tree.
She felt him move again, but now the youkai did not stop himself any
longer from letting out his moans and groans, nor did Hiei suppress his violent
growls or snarls. It was like Keiko had opened something up inside of the
closed off youkai and was now able hear and to see fully.
Suddenly the brunette made up her mind and moved finally, a little
unsure at first, her left hand down Hiei's torso until she came in contact with
his hand there.
The youkai went perfectly still under her, not even a hair on his head
moved. Then, just when the girl was
about to remove her bold hand, he suddenly shuddered violently and gripped her
hand before Keiko could remove it from there again!
She could hear him pant in her ear while Hiei held it down on his bulge
in his pants firmly. And so, Keiko went along with his unspoken plea, and
pressed down on it more with her hand; even daring to move along it slowly.
Unsure at first but more and more steady she moved with his aid along
it.
Suddenly the girl got a little naughtier and gripped the steel inside
his pants, curious of what that would do to him.
His reaction was a sudden wanton cry of utter pleasure, and came
promptly along with an arching of his back with her on top of his chest, high
in the air. Like Keiko weighed nothing
for him.
Heavily panting he tried to calm back down from the incredible feeling
he just experienced seconds before as Keiko got slowly naughtier!
Not that the demon wanted to complain about it!!
Suddenly the only thought Hiei was able to form was to remove his pants
and try to find out just how naughty she could get!
He did exactly that.
And after his hand guided her's to his now bare and overheated flesh,
Hiei was not only rewarded with a sudden surprised gasp from Keiko, as he felt
simply incredible for a long moment! All Hiei could do, was to moan into the
hollow of flesh between her neck and shoulder. It felt sooo good to have her do
this!
The girl was startled at first but soon the youkai seemed to take her
deeper and deeper with him into his aroused state! She found herself somehow
trying to reach her own aching core in her panties with her free hand. Keiko
did not know really what she needed suddenly that badly, but somehow her lust
hazed mind told her to take her hand down there.
But he slapped it away with a warning growl before she could reach it
with his free one and laid his own instead right between her slightly spread
legs.
It shot bolts of unknown pleasure through the teen!
"Let me return all the pleasures you bring me, Keiko! I swear you will love it when I do this
instead of you. Let me show you how incredibly sensitive you are there; show
you how unbelievable you will feel when I return your favor to you. I assure
you, you will feel so unbelievably good that you will never want to feel
anything else!"
With that huskily whispered into her ear, Hiei began to search his way
through the damp curls inside her panties torturously slow.
He didn't stop his journey until he found the hidden sensitive bundle of
nerves between her moist folds. Keiko's hips arched high into the air with a
cry of his name when he brushed his fingers against it slightly.
The youkai nearly choked at the wetness and heat he found there!
If he did not do something fast, he would lose it fully and simply take
her!
But instead he let it heighten his own arousal more and began to rock
violently against her hand on his hard member.
Hiei could sense she was fast getting nearer and nearer to her first
orgasm, especially after he slipped one finger into her hot core that dripped
slightly with her juices. Her mewling sounds drove the youkai mad!
When he sensed her coming near to her edge, he suddenly bent to her ear
and whispered huskily into it the words that brought the girl finally over her
edge into sweat bliss.
"Keiko, let loose.
Come and fly with me!"
That was it for her; Keiko came convulsing violently down on his finger
inside of her with a guttural cry of utter pleasure that howled through the
room!
It didn't take the demon much longer to let his release wash over him
and take him with her. After a set of sharp trusts with his narrow hips Hiei
shot his load over their intertwined hands on his member in strong gushes of
white semen. With a ferrous wild growl himself, which mixed with Keiko’s cries
of release in the room!
After some minutes of coming down from his sweet release; Hiei suddenly
brought his hands together in the front of her curious and slightly dazzled
gaze. He mixed their juices together in one of it and began to lick it from his
hand; never leaving her flushed face and embarrassed eyes.
"You taste delicious, but we both do even better!"
He told the bewildered girl and sniffed onto her skin once more; then
Hiei tucked her body in, after he secured her skirt and panties in place again,
deeply into his embrace and kissed the crown of her hair. Silently marveling
into their mixed scents, which lingered on the skin of her body now!
"Go and try to rest, Keiko. Believe me, I know you must be tired
after this and you really need it. I swear, I will not interrupt your sleep
again or try to touch you without again permission."
He nuzzled his nose deeper into her hair after this as slowly Hiei could
feel the teen relax in his protecting embrace. He only stood up again to remove
his cloak and scarf and to clean himself a little, then he went back into the
bed and snuggled her back against his body.
Hiei placed his sword near to his grip before he went to sleep. Making
very sure, even in his sleepy and fully sated mind, his own body was between
the door and her. The youkai fell into a very light sleep.
Suryallee
Looks at her reader questionably and tucks on the rim of her shirt; hot
here, ne?
Somebody wants something to drink?
Until next time!
Don't forget me to tell what you think!
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